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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#671

dat was a heartwarming updt

d kids r genuinely happy n d credit goes 2 khushi n arnav i guess mostly cuz of khushi

if she had nt bought arnav here dn he wud nvr hav met dm n made dm happy

d sayng

" FRIENDS HAVE THE GREATEST INFLUENCE ON A PERSONS CHARACTER" s apt

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Another great update!! Absolutely adored Arnav in this chapter! I can full on see him being drawn to Khushi even though she seems a bit hesitant! I wonder who's not liking this side of 'Chotey'... Maybe his mum??? The quote at the end is so appropriate, I thinking that a lot of people smile and laugh all the time to hide how they really feel, and Khushi seems to be doing the same thing... And I think by helping the other children smile kinda helps her feel better about her inner turmoil. Another great chapter, looking forward to what happens next (time for Arnav to man up! / find out what he feels so darn guilty about!) thanks for making my revision break full of 'awww- Arnavs being so sweet' moments LOL !!!

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CrazyArshiFan

@CrazyArshiFan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Hope more romance is coming our way.

Hope the pair of eyes are not going to ruin it even before it starts.

Awesome update.

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Really Really looking forward to see what happens next. Who is not happy with Chote.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

finally Arnav is changing and some one from his family doesnt like it.. loved it..

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Another Awesome update Lava👏👏

Arnav brought the gifts for the kids and even tld them stories...wow😃

Loved the way hw u wrote the whole scene😊

Thank god thy both cleared their thts abt thinking eachother as brother and sis😆

Chocolaty Romance😉😉Lovely😛

Was that his mother???Oh noCliff hanger...Waiting for Sunday😊

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

as i read more and more of this story it gets more and more beautiful...

arnav gifting the kids toys and his books...him sharing what at once he and khushi shared...and now this new found unknown feeling that they are feeling...unnamed and very tingly sensation...and who saw them together his nani or mother???

loved the update...

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

chapter 13

Naina stared in awe at her son, who had not only selected her saree but also the jewellery along with it, without even asking for his suggestion. Something had changed in him, that too rapidly because she was sure till yesterday, he was the same aloof brooding son of hers hibernating in his cocoon.

"What?" Arnav asked in surprise, wondering why his mother was staring at him like that. And without any preamble, he saw tears glistening from his mother's eyes.

"Ma, what's wrong?" he rushed towards her in panic.

"Nothing. I'm just very happy, you know." Naina replied, kissing her son's forehead, leaving him all confused at her reaction. But how could she describe her feelings, the joy she felt knowing that her son was finally back to her?

Now the only thing left to figure out was what or who had brought about that change in him and a silent prayer of thanks escaped from her lips.

----these lines tell whether arnie is in love or not

----whether he s transformed or nt

----i was so feeling bad wen read f the kids thrown out f orphanges

since tey r handicapped...

----even orphanges r lukng fwd for profit... 😔 how bad...

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

Amazing update... It is nice what Arnav did for the kids... But would he have done the same if it wasn't Khushi with the kids?? I feel whatever he did, he did for him only after seeing Khushi with the kids...

The chocolate eating scene was gr8... Waiting to know who was the person at the last, I guess Arnav's mother...