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tht was really soo sweet of arnav...

i loved the update..!!
eager to noe wat happened to khushi.. but as u said it will be revealed at the climax..
will w8 till then 😊

it was pretty amusing to see arnav being worried about khushi considering him as her brother😆
and and and update soon !

Thank you for the update.

Wow ... What an update... Outstanding writing

What can I say... I am lost for words...you made cry with your brilliant writing and I am glad too that I came out of hibernation and decided to comment after reading every update of 'Mirage' and not commenting once...thinking about it now from a writers point of view I feel like a cheat...someone only taking and not giving any thing in return...all I can say now is that I am sorry and I am trying to make up, hope I am successful.

You again made me cry with your words of wisdom, there is so much truth in it and that is exactly the case with some people who hide their tears and grief behind their laugh but other people around such people sadly lack the perception and insight to see it.

Arnav is trying to please Khushi and doing the things which will make her happy...walking in her foot steps...in doing so he is changing and getting the pleasure which he did not think existed or he ever wanted...a biggest compliment he got today that a child is comparing him to his father or to even see him as

People deprived of love exactly behave like Khushi...hesitating to accept a simple gift or words of effection. He says that she has his love too...did he say that lightly...has he thought it through...I don't think so...all the feelings are there simmering and bubbling
but he is not consciously aware of them...he is doing things but he has not thought why he is doing it...he does not want Khushi to see him as a brother...he has not asked why...the attraction is also raising its head time to time...it will be the sight to be hold when these realisations take place in a conscious mind, at the moment I feel everything which they are feeling and doing is on complete sub conscious level...I might be wrong in thinking this way.

Who was that person who has realised the reason for the changes in Arnav? His Mum.

Amazingly written as always.

Thanks For the update.

That was an amazinggg update!!

I guess I wont ever be tired to let you know jus how flawless n natural your writing seems to me, you indeed are one of the finest writer of this forum with no bits of compromise on quality of any update!!

Arnav is a gem of a person, very rarely do u see a richie hugging n storytelling orphans
Truly khushi has immensely affected his personality n nature

Hahaha bothers n sister, gosh, I can only wonder how mortified arnav wud ve been had khushi told him an alternate answer to what he expected

Awwwh loved their chocolates sharing moment, was soo emotional n intense

Uuhhh ooo, I jus hope that naina doesn't goes against khushi n acknowledge her fr the changes she got in arnav!!

Loved reading it to bits

Amazinggg update!!!

This was pure and sweet. This was pure magic that only a well thought of author can write to describe the action of a friend who wants to erase the bad memories and declare his friendship over. More-affirm to her that he is still the same person who was and will remain her best friend. Like she said, he could have donated money but he gave his time and stuff that were close to him and her.

I was hoping u would have update today

touchy...

4. "And?" he asked, once again, before he grabbed her hand and licked the chocolate off the wrapper.

She looked no less than a deer caught in headlights at this unexpected gesture. "Didn't your teacher tell you to share things with your friends?" he asked in the most innocent voice, licking more of the melted chocolate, smirking at her.

"You... you have cho...chocolate on... your chin." She stammered all the way, as her finger involuntarily reached out to wipe the tiny puddle on his stubble. And now it was his turn to act like a deer caught in headlights.

even the small gestures like holding hand, touching cheeks seems heavenly...:)

overall, WELL WRITTEN Rachel...:)👏👏👏