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amazinggg...loved it...
ur story is not bt arnav n khushi ;
itz about two golden heartzzz...

one heart shows how to love...
otherone learnz how to love...

arnav changed..his hesitation is overpowered by khushi...

loved how he shows his love to kids...not his money...

and kidz reaction were nicely written...

aww...so dey dont want to b like siblingzzz...huh...??????

n chocolate licking scene z hot...
waiting for next update..

Awesum update..arnav has given the childrem immense happiness..love the way how he tried to make khushi happy bt helping her..their small chocolate moment was being watch..bt who was it..naina?? Or arnav's father...waiting to knw..update soon

Love how Khushi's care for others is rubbing off on Arnav. And the way you cleared up the brother sister angle was cute- never had considered their relationship to be seen in that way by others, but that was neatly dealt with.

Beautiful Update.
Very true that being the cause of somebody's happiness is very gratifying. Glad that Arnav learnt this art from Khushi.

The end sounded like a trouble in paradise.. Was it mami, Nani or naina? Pl save poor Khushi.

Hi,

That's so inspiring and radiant chapter at least for me

As such I'm speech less with the story itself and now I'm more than astonished by the way Khushi is treating those little angels and Arnav doing the same thing .. Not sure in reality but feels good even to read it where those angels are getting the attention and love from someone atleast..Khushi is definetely going over and beyond to help them but what Arnav did was also a wonderful gesture !!!Being able to feel the pain of others and try to help them to eliminate some of it in any simple way is actually a biggest virtue I believe ...
That was soo charming when both of them checked with each other about considering as brother and sister :) But I'm bit upset that Arnav missed Khushi's excitement about him not considering as his sister.But that's ok he will know eventually :)

The whole choclate event was very sweet and little bit passionate too .. But I'm bit apprehensive about the person who is not quite happy with what he/she saw .. because they are still in the budding stage of revealing their emotions towards each other and any thing at this point could shatter them permanently. Let me stop worrying at this point and wait for the remaining tale to be revealed ..

Excellent update; very touching,emotional and an eye opener as well...

Great update!

Arnav proved what a great human being he is. Khushi is right, he could have just written a check, but instead he personally went over there, delivered gifts, interacted with the children, read them a story, gave them chocolates...all things they could appreciate and will remember for a long time.

I like you have built this story of Arnav and Khushi getting their friendship back without any interferences from outside parties...and now that someone has seen them so closely (I'm guessing his mother), they are just too attached for them to be broken apart easily. Even if Arnav has to face some resistance, he would be able to fight for her now. Right now, he is just thinking on terms of friendship, but I think he's starting to realize there's more to it than that...you don't want to wake up seeing your friends eyes or remember the feel of your friends finger tips on your lips!

And you're right, people who have a lot of pain do mask it with a smile or laugh.