The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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monsi08

@monsi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

I can only love d way u write n d story itself.. it depicts d era which i can only read about n understand.. but cant really get angry or upset wid anyone including arnab d way i wud hv if it was a present day story. its d way it was at dat time ..
But kya likhti ho yaar.. superb 😃

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Khushi is innocent, but don't let Arnav do something stupid.

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anuprika

@anuprika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#913

how could you easily transport me to culcutta f 1923.
and at d end whn i realisd i was still n my room
i can just say..i want more..

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

I don't have the words to describe how wonderful this story has evolved into. Please don't lose the momentum and keep writing. This story deserves to be written and read.

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sulu_123

@sulu_123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Hi jenny.

An interesting update. Loved the scene in the mango orchard and khushi's playful innocence.

Its natural that arnab should become increasingly aware of khushi's feminity and the sudden desire he felt for her, much against his wish shook him. To him she is just a child. Bt she did awaken his supressed desires. But couldn't digest the fact that a principled man like him sought the fulfilment of his desires from the very nauch women he abhorred, because of his father's habits.

Oh..pl jenny, let him not complete his adventure with one of those women. I wish he comes to his senses after seeing the song and dance mehfils . Just cant bear for him to go seeking for physical fulfilment in this way.

So jenny, PLEASE ?

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#916

awesome.loved it.thanks 4 the pm

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Interesting backdrop Jenny..The culture of Kolkatta during the pre independence time...the characters, the customs were very beautifully written which could render a visual to each scene. Arnav is caught in between many issues..i hope he doesnt hurt Khushi anymore..