The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 90

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful writing dear...an enthralling update...i was totally engrossed while reading it...
all da emotions were brilliantly portrayed...
but feeling so bad 4 khushi...
plxxx update soon...
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thnxxx 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

We have so many examples of individuals with ideologies ahead of their time or era and Arnab is one such one human being as well.. that proves his interaction with his father ..

Even I'm being bit apprehensive about Khushi's bonding with Pranab and I can understand Arnab's thought process especially with the age difference.. But in a way the friendship is kind of necessary as it is giving her a chance to live her childhood even though she is married ….

I was really pleased when Arnav did talk to his mother to keep the doll ; and I liked the fact that he feels that Khushi needs the doll as companion since she lost her family and that she doesn't need to be forced to grow up ..

I'm not sure what to deduce from his visit to that place ; nevertheless I want to wait until the next update to see whether or not he really goes …

Awesome update !!! I still wonder the way you grab us from one era to other with your stories J

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update, u really write the emotions of each character very well 😊
Felt sorry for both Arnab and Khushi for the situation they are in. At least Arnab took out his frustration on khushi but what abt that poor soul.
Hope he changes his mind and comes back to khushi😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Jenny..this was such an ineffable update.Perfect amount of intrigue and thrill.Love!!


Your lapidary writing coupled with Kolkata in the 1920s as the backdrop of your story adds new and exciting dimensions to this unique ArHi tale.😊

Will be waiting for your next update.Excited😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliantly written, thank you... looking for more to come!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i don't remember whether i commented for part 3 - i had read it when i was coming back from shopping - will check now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for d pm.

Super updt.

Loved khushi n her innocence n her playin with arnab's bro u dint write abt khushi's reaction on getting her doll back.
khushi poor thng does nt even knw wht he sd n wht he expected her n wht she hs to do coz he told her he needs a woman nt a child.

Arnav headed 2 tht area so he's following his father.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh its a pleasure hunny you know i just loved ur
Concept of Mohini and Mahraja Arnav it was very
Diferent n classy i just couldnt thnk afte dat
N now finaly i got to know about ur new creation
Oh im so happy thank you for dis Jenny...
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Posted: 12 years ago
just started reading this...
very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago

excellent story Jenny, read you Impenetrable Heart (going for seconds) ALS, and now TBWD. love all your stories, feels like watching a movie. plz continue, waiting eagerly for an update.

Swapna

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