The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1021

Speechless that what's my condition is after reading all the updates... this tale is absolutely gripping and mesmerizing... the words are sheer beauty...
it really does transport back you to the pre-independence times..
the characters are so real and well-defined... i think you have done a lot of research for this... i greatly appreciate this effort of yours to give us this masterpiece...

if i had luurved ALS before, I am total goner for this now... looking forward to the next updates Jenny, i know this is going to be a memorable ride 😊

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priya

@priyatnl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1022

such a sweet story
I look forward to it so much

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RaatkiRani

@RaatkiRani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1023

one of the best pieces of writing on this entire forum!

awesome job!!

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1024

A very thoughtful and intriguing concept,well chooses words,i really liked the way you're showing the history through ur words..Really loved it

Plz PM me next time.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1025

This is the first story that I'm reading of yours and I'm gripped. The era itself has so much from social evils to independence struggle. Here is a Arnav who wants to turn out differently from what his father is and there is a Khushi who wants to play with her doll and yet wants to be loved and cherished by her husband, though she hardly understands the difference, for her being a wife means taking good care of Arnav.
I'm hooked as how will Arnav and Khushi will form a bond.