The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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Meeshaali

@Meeshaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Very diferent n heart touching concept loved ur work
Its awsum as usual !!!!! Mostly i thnk how cn sum one
Write so meaningful so intesting... Hatts off to u.

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Great update
Hmm arnab seems to be getting more and more aware of khushi
Oh no he's visiting that area

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

It was a great update Jenny, I don't like the fact that arnav is visiting the so called area. I hope he comes back to khushi feeling guilty! Thanks for the pm.

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#904

Fantastis update love it

just hope anab wiil not follow the step of his father

eagerly waiting to read more

thanks for pm

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rumu

@rumu

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

omg !!!! what was this ??? do u even know what have u done to me again !!!!! by reading ur this story i m again lost in some different world...every time u r doing this with me..from THE IMPENETRABLE HEART to A LATE SPRING and now this...3 stories 3 different worlds and memories...how will i breathe ??

being a bengali girl i read few bengali famous novels of tagore's and Sharatchandra (Devdas author)..and those books are really very special for me cz those were given by my dad...they were awesome...and i used to get lost in those books..the way i lost today...it was easy for them to write at that time,, cause whatever they saw around they wrote them..but i can feel how much difficult for u to write today about those time...u really work hard to entertain us and i really appreciate that..

i must tell u again that u are an amazing writer...and god have blessed u with vast of knowledge...keep it up...

coming to the update...u have described each and every character beautifully... every dialogue and thoughts of every characters are too perfect...and the last line of this chapter took my breathe away..i had goosebumps while reading the line "how do u become a woman ???"

love love loved this story sooo much...i know m talking too much so bye for now...

p.s. my dad gave me those books to make me learn bengali and know about bengali culture..but i m still lake in that 😛 ... so i wanna tell that u r truly brilliant..and m loving u more...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

amazing update loved it thanks for the pm

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#907

Jenny u took us once again back to black and white times.
I guess this was best to read today when Pakistan and India are celebating their independence.
Amazing story loved it do continue this soon plz

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#908

I wish my thammi and nani were alive today, I could have asked them what it was like in those years and how they cope up with the child marriage! And I am so proud of being a reader of yours, who not only write stories from different culture and region but can also portray any era with so much ease and excellence. Right now, my heart goes to Khushi, everyone is eager to snatch away her childhood and innocence but glad to see she found a companion in form of his brother-in-law. Difference of opinions between a father and son is always there, no matter what year it is and the whole scene was brilliantly written. Arnab's anger was justified, he is trying his best to save Khushi from him only but he did hurt her intentionally or unintentionally. And the end, Keeping asides the morals, I am quite eager to know how you gonna take that scene ahead if you are intending it to. Anger always makes you to things which might be wrong in other's perspective but at that time, that things only seems the best or right!

Thanks for the PM Jen, it was a fabulous update, brilliantly written!