The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 88

Hii dear...just read your story...thanks for sending the pm to me...otherwise I would have missed a beautiful and different story...
Right from the beginning of this story my heart was beating so loudly..the way u hv written this is incredible...it is so close to reality of our society in those days...
Love khushi in this story ...she is so innocent yet so Mature...she is ready to do anything for her husband even if it means losing her innocence ...
Arnav on the other hand is a strong character ...he wants to preserve his wife's innocence and give her time to grow up but the his needs plus frustration have forced him to choose the way many men choose ...it was hurting to read that about him but I guess its very natural...he is a human being afterall...
Continue soon...I would love to read this story...and I hope it doesn't end soon..its really one of a kind

Hi, I just found your stories by recommendation from a writer who I really like on IF. Just caught up to ALS and simply looove this one. I love that era when India was fighting for independence as I watched too many Movies about this as a kid. Your characters are amazing and you depict their feelings so well. I loved the conflicted young man who even though is diagonally opposite to his father still needs to stay in the haveli with him until his studies are done. I love the the little girl losing her family and simply accepting her husband even though she has no clue what it means to be a wife. I have a feeling she is about to grow up really fast in the coming updates having made up her mind to become a woman. Funny how he is noticing the changes in her and how he has to fight his demons. It is the painful reality of being a human, we have needs and we feel. It is how we control it is what differentiate us from each other. Even though it sounds totally unreasonable for a 14 year old to consume her marriage (who can imagine a 14 year old to be married as well nowadays right?), it was fairly common in those days. Let's face it, it is still happening in remote areas illegally. So I hope that instead of turning to the courtesans, he takes the time to get to know her. Of course it does not help that he is rightfully against the concept of child bride. You are doing a great job at depicting the issues, the conflicts and how each one are reacting to this. No one is right or wrong, so it is hard to be mad at any of these characters. They are what they are due to their situation and upbringing. What is nice though, is how Kushi is still given some space to have somewhat a breathing room to ease into the life that is expected from her. I love her relationships with his brother and her Nani.

Awesome update! Khushi is gradually changing physically. Which arnab has started to notie and apprciate and then Immediately feel guilty with his thoughts. She has started to bond a happy relationship with her brother in law.

Arnabs relationship with his father is getting worse. His mothers trying to get him to stay back using Khushi. Khushis innocence is still blatantly there which has angered Arnab more. He does not want to take away her innocence and make a grow up before her time. Whereas khuhis is ready to do just that to keep her husband happy. I can't believe he's actually following his fathers footsteps. Although i suppose it was a like norm in those Days. And he Is a man afterall who is stuck with a childbride. But I still hope he doesn't go through with it. He is still legally married.

Anyways do contine soon.

hey dear

loved the story and the update... continue soon

👏 read 3 chap in a go,brilliant

awesome update

nice chap ...hmm where is he going??? hopefully he will not do any thing which he later regret thanks for pm

Hmm.. Hope Arnav doesn't do anything stupid..