JUST A STORY A MOHARIKA FF [ SECOND THREAD] - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

THEN [FATE]

Does she have a name?

Shall we call her fate?

Nameless, motherless, father unknown, no one to call her own. Somewhere in the confines of a shanty town filled with thieves, pickpockets, prostitutes, she sat.

A lock of hair fell across her face as she painted her toes with a cheap nail polish.

The tiny tv blared the latest film songs and she hummed along.

She could not bear the insistent sobbing by the other girl who was curled up in the corner of the dingy room.

Will you shut up, she looked up a tad irritated.

There is no point crying. There is no one listening to your cries. No one will come and comfort you. No one will help you get out of here.

Her voice flat, emotionless, no feelings, no pain, NO nothing.

She stared at the girl for sometime, bent her head back to her toes.

There was momentary silence as the sobs quieted and tv stopped blaring as the power went off..

The tiny room was hot. But she had got used to it over the years.

The fingers applying the polish stopped as she heard the footsteps.

The sound always made her cringe. Her lips thinned as she pressed them tightly. A drop of polish red polish dripped onto the floor.

Reema the voice rasped.

How she hated that name.

She did not look up. Her eyes closed. She knew what the next words will be.

"Get Ready". You have a client the voice continued.

Reemmma. The voice was near the door now.

Rasili Bai stood there almost blocking the entire doorway.

Her beady eyes lined with khol, her lips stained with paan looked at the girl sobbing and then at Reema.

Tacky artificial jewellery shown from her ears and neck.

She opened her paan dabba for another paan. Her bosom heaved as she looked angrily at the sobbing girl,.

Reema got up, never once looking at the Rasili.

The girl stopped sobbing and huddled more into the corner, fear giving way to tears.

Edited by jayvenk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg! Omg! Omg!
i m gonna faint
adla is back..
love you Jaya di..you are a sweetheart...muuuaaahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
Adla is back I missed it like crazy n miss my Moharika 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!😃 adla is back ...great update👏missing moharika even more nw😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice, thank you, after a very long time indeed. Welcome back 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly welcome back, Jaya di.
And a lovely update, the bai and her paan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi guys.. 😊 am sneha.. 😊 many of u knw me..dose who r active on twitter.
thankuuu soo much jaya di for bringing ADLA back.. 😊
interesting update.. 😊
pls keep updating coz we love our adorable adla shooo much.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u all for coming back to read and comment.
Reema has a small part in the adla story. I want to give her the due importance.
U will understand her part as i write about her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
I will say spooky update but u have laid the plot well for the new character. Please update next and welcome back Jaya and thanks a ton for this awesome Adla update 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Looks like a setup in a brothel interesting to know what lays ahead. Pleasant surprise this. Thanks Jayshree I don't feel any disconnect to this story even after months 😳

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