JUST A STORY A MOHARIKA FF [ SECOND THREAD]

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@Patrarekha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

may b its becoz of time gap it sometimes can feel like a thread hd been torn, need to retie it that's it

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sia221

@sia221

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Nice updates.. Jaya.. both of them...!! ⭐️⭐️

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Diala

@Diala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Dersha darling, why so harsh? I believe this is your very first comment, could have said something nice first before giving a constructive criticism. What exactly is your problem with Jaya's style? She might not be all those people you have referenced, but she is atleast an inspiration for Utti and has also taken a leaf out of his body of works in creating unbelievable characters and situations.

Jaya, I guess in public domain this is all common place. For every 100 positive notes, you are bound to receive one or two such negative comments. Good you have handled it with grace. But even you have to accept guys like Ad don't exist. And in that sense the characterization is kinda of lame and unrealistic. I like how you write - especially your KK was fantastic - but please end this mushy nonsense or pack some action (don't mean ones that all go awww about). Life is more than dimples, hot body and brooding males who don't seem to have any other responsibilities in life other than girls almost half their age :( )

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

In my defence I have never touched on adrit physical appearance. Except for his dimples.

I I do expect criticism. I think I do write action. Action need not be fighting and murder.

My action here is emotional.

Yes in that aspect u can compare me to utti.

But again my characters cry for a reason not because they have extra glycerine.

Adrit is responsible and does not brood. I dint think have given any hint of that.

I think ur confusing my adrit to mahadev.

Both are completely different in every aspect. Dimples is something any human can have.

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Diala

@Diala

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Extra Glycerin 😉. You cracked me up there.

And yes, I think I did make that assumption/confusion whatever you call it, but that is but natural given the context. You are telling me ADLA has nothing to do with anyones imagination of the lead couple from the past?

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

May be a few physical aspects are similar. And since I was writinga FF mohit and sona were the ones I started off with. But right now they are my characters. It's got nothing to do with anyone. Each reader can use their imagination add they read.

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hemavidz

@hemavidz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

wow finally all 4 of the gang at one place nice UD like to say something its not jus because i imagine mohit n sona as AdLa im reading this FF its coz of Jai's writing im still eager to read more n more of this 2 pp Adrit n Shyla "Just a Story" give an oppurtunity which is otherwise is impossible so Jai pls dont stop this story until otherwise you feel like doing it 😳 its a kind request from my side as ardent follower of "Just a Story"😊

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Hi hema I will be writing not to worry. Criticism is fine. I owe it not just to my readers but also to myself to complete this story. Thank u all for the encouragement.