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Posted: 11 years ago
REEMA/RANI
Reema peered into the mirror. I am not reema she told her reflection. I am rani. She changed her name according to the current popular serials. Her best feature stared back. Large eyes. She was not bad looking. But neither was she beautiful. She picked up the expensive lipstick deep red in color. She grinned as she applied it.She had neatly swiped it from a lady who had sat applying it on one of the several tourists cars that passed by. Kajal was next. She wish she could get to steal one of those really good ones some day. Right now she had to make do with the one rasili bai have her. Dabbing on some powder she wondered who the client was. Hope some drunk truck driver, made it easy for her to steal from those bas***ds.
schooling her face, closing all her senses she stepped out of the room into the dimly lit Road which led to a row of small rooms. The curtains were the only privacy that each girl got.
Sleazy item songs played from the rooms. smells of Deep fried food filled the air.
She stopped just before she entered the cubicle. She hated it. She stepped in.
The stench of sweat booze and cigarettes made her want to throw up.
The guy grabbed her even before she drew the curtain. Started pawing her.
She sat still. She went cold. She died a little as she had everyday for the last 10 years.
Edited by jayvenk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Adla is back. As usual your writing is flawless Jaya and very interesting new twist to the storyšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update šŸ‘..waiting 4 the next part eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jayashree hi and am so happy to see updates of this story. Good u have resumed writing it 😃

Wonderful update though kind of confused with the introduction of new characters but looking forward to read more of this šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOW

Shyla its breakfast time. We need to go in.

Her feet in the water, No, her head moved.

Shyla, adrit coaxed her gently.

More vigorous shaking followed.

Want some chocolates? That was Ridhi.

She looked up, her eyes twinkled.

Promise? She crossed her heart looking towards Adi.

Promise , crossing his heart obligingly,

He stood up and held out his hand, come on then..

She placed her hand in his,

His fingers closed over hers protectively.

She stood up slowly.

Naren moved the wheelchair. No , will walk she signed.

Adrit fingers gripped her more tightly as started walking. She had a slight limp, but she proceeded anyway.

Ridhi put her hand through shylas and held it loosely, Naren left the wheelchair, the three docs looked at each other. A smile played on all their lips. They made their way slowly into the hospice.

Nandu too smiled, as he parked the car. He had found some round gold wala.

Adrit had requested that breakfast be served on the breezy terrace.

Poha curds and coffee was set on the table.

Adrit settled shyla comfortably on the chair. She still held his hand. Don't go her eyes told him.

He patted her hand and drew a chair close to hers.

He bent to place a cushion behind her back.

As he did so the rudraksh slipped out and moved slowly in front of her eyes.

He felt her going still, heard a sound deep in her throat.

She looked at the moving rudraksh, as if hynotised, her fingers shook slightly as she reached out to hold it.

Her eyes looked up into his, she held the bead more tightly in her fingers, pulling him closer.

A tear formed at the corner of her eyes.

Naren gently held her other hand which was shivering by now.

It's ok shylu riddhi whispered, just close your eyes, let your thoughts flow.

Adrit stood still, watching her struggle.

Her lower lip trembled slightly. There was rapid eye movement as she closed her eyes.

Her head was against a crisp white shirt, she was playing with a rudraksh.

"Stop playing with the bead and look up at me La" she heard a voice somewhere deep inside her soul.

With a gasp she opened her eyes.

"I know you , she was saying with her fingers, but I don't know who you are"

He caught the tear in his finger.

He smiled , allowing his dimple to play more deeply.

She gazed at it, her finger lifted to dip into it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
aah, so the master story teller is back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow didi u r back love u was waiting eagerly for our Adla . Wonderful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh she is trying to remember and getting glimpses rudraksh she remembered and she could walk too and again dimples sigh update soon felt like olden time
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow NOW update stirred so many feelings. Though they have been back after a long time they never left ur soul. Super update Jaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update jaya mam ā­ļø m soo happy u r back 😃

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