JUST A STORY A MOHARIKA FF [ SECOND THREAD] - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
It was a very sweet update Akka😊just waiting for this to happen,

"time to bring La back to her Dr. A".


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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

NOW

With Shyla in between the four people sat with their feet in the water. A comfortable silence. Each in their own thoughts, but yet they were one.

Shyla knew not who these 3 people were, yet she felt completely connected with them.

She sat relaxed her feet splashing happily.

Adi sat trying to put together the last 48 hours. It had changed his life from being barren to once again filled with colour. He knew it will take time to bring her to him, but he was prepared to wait .

Ridhi held shyla hand, happiness seemed unlimited. The impossible had happened. Shyla looked towards her now and then, a smile on her lips. Ridhi leaned forward to place a kiss on her cheeks..

Naren stroked la head gently, still trying to figure out what was happening. He was not a believer in god. But right now he knew that something powerful up there was the reason why he was sitting next to shyla.

He looked at his best friend, Yes Happiness was unlimited.

Meena and the Cheif watched the scene from the balcony.

Cannot believe my eyes she repeated for the 100th time. Look at her. 2 days and she is a different person altogether.

Her memories were dormant Meena, said the Chief. There was nothing to stimulate it.

Adrit coming here is awakening it. The next few days are crucial. She might have several attacks.

Glad that all of them are doctors, I am sure they will know how to handle the situation.

There are a few formalities before I can allow her to be released from here, the chief looked a little worried.

He needed proof of Shyla Identity. He trusted Adrit completely but rules were rules.

He looked at the 4 of them. He looked up, dear Lord , you do work in strange way don't you ??


Nandu hummed as he drove into the town to see if he could find some round gold wala...


Edited by jayvenk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Superb wonderful update..Makes u feel so happy and good. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Awesome I love my adla n missed reading this story. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Super, update Jaya di 👏.
I just loved the way how Adrit is feeling for Shyla, when she was in trouble.
Poor chief, abide by rules, but he's a good man.
Waiting for the next part, and thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
jaya, you are making me emotional, never knew that chockolates can mak you cry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Wow this one touches the heart. Thanks Jaya. 😊❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
What a pathetic update!!!U need to take a leaf out of someone's book.If ur comparing urself to Cecilia Ahern or Nicholas Sparks then u ought to stop that.Clearly u have lost ur midas touch.Hope u surpass my disappointment in ur next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh I am sorry. I was not intentionally comparing myself. Can u tell why it is pathetic. I Can improve on my next update. My apologies to the readers.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww so many emotions running through feel for each one of those characters. Lovely. 👍🏼

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