ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread Two*

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

😃

This was absolutely awesome ...

Loved the mature relationship that Arnav and Khushi share ...

frankly I never thought that there was anything on between them ... 😆

so much tenderness between them ...

both the couples trying to set each other up ...

with an exchange of siblings ... 😆

it was a real cute story and loved the way you narrated it ...

brought back real fond memories of the show ...

Thanks Semanti ... 🤗

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Beautiful story. Such a wonderful manifestation of love of all types -- lovers and sibling love.

I really love your updates, both of you. Keep it up !!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

She s 32. . N he s wit silver-grey hair. .
Siblings xchange. . 😛
Tese two r wrkg to patchup payash pair. . Wile payash providing space fo patch up of arshi pair. .
Aggressive kiss too a part of drama LOL. .
Bechari tese two wit promising cute handhold. . Nice waiting fo nxt. .
Congrats on the new thread. .

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Congratulations for the new Thread.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

You are just so awesomely Genius. The story was wonderful.

The description of Spring in Pennsylvania was nice.

I loved the sarcastic Arnav and hipster glasses and bohemian skirt-clad Khushi.

The characterization of all the characters was Awesome. The matured love story that can be expressed without words, was so, so Great.

It was surprising to read about Arnav as a Professor teaching Romantic Poetry.. But the teenage girls drooling over him.. is quite expected.

I felt that Akash, in this story, was very similar to Arnav in the show for the following reasons -

* According to Khushi, he doesn't pay two hoots about the social niceties and propriety.

* He is quite bold as a lover. 😉

* He has a stuble which tickles Payal to no end.

* He is very, very protective about Khushi Di .. Just like Arnav was protective about his Di.

* He quarelled with Payal over petty issues.. exactly like Arnav and Khushi's quarel.

* Lastly, the scene where Akash played along Khushi and Arnav's plan , and ran to Payal, grabbed her and yelled at her.. was distinctly similar to a scene in the show where Arnav was frantic with worry , thinking that Khushi had met with an accident.

I felt that, even Khushi
had a faint touch of Anjali in her - the common link of being betrayed by a cheating, scumbag of a husband..

I just loved the twisted twist.. Akash and Payal were trying their hand in match-making Arnav and Khushi while the latter pair was doing the same.

Great retelling of the scene.

I just loved the phrase " deceptively platonic "

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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hiralhk

@hiralhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Just superb...
Love twists...
Awesome story...
Thanks for pm...dear...

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Milii

@Milii

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Loved the concept...and how you changed the characters...

These tales are absolutely one of the best things I read in this forum...

Thanks to both of you for this wonderful series...

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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Loved It...
Congrars for the New Thread...

Edited by arshi_sunshine - 12 years ago

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

That was freaking awesome. Didnt expect the twist, honestly.

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hi gals!!

Oh That was another addition to your list of brilliancy at writing! :)

I liked the mature ARHI ... and not that 'for god sake' the usual business tycoon of a persona that we are always made to see in Arnav! (not that i am complaining - -he he he)

But the idea of Arnav being an English Prof is so cool!! i can so imagine his demeanor being in his casual best while doing his bit of reciting and explaining Romantic poetry !! OOH!! that will be oozing out aplomb! :)

Khushi's characterization as well was so well sketched .. .and imagining in her long skirts and scarf , braided hair and face being bespectacled; a vivid mental image framed of which was obviously contrived to charm...

and to have been paired up with the Arnav described above ... was a blessed vision ...

ha ha ha... i liked the Payash pairing and the reversal of relationship as being sibling to ARHI... That was so sweet to imagine in their respective roles that way!

So the Sister Bro duo played it well for each other!! i loved it ... not only did we have Arhi doing their bit for Payash... in this case we got a vice versa situation as well... that we soo wanted to happen in the show once upon a time...

That was a short nevertheless a lovely tale!!

So thank Juhi Semanti! for yet another fabulous tale!

You gals rock! :)

Edited by LeenaRocks - 12 years ago