ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread Two*

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

What do I think... huh magical👏

Arnav professor... and that too literature romantic poems and stories...ofcourse full girls must be in OO la la land with their hotty professor romancing ...

Khushi jealous always beautiful when she is envy and jealous on something...

Both couples want other to settle down easily.

Akash and Payal wants other to settle down when they already in love

Arnav and Khushi they too in love and want Payash too settle...

One thing In Arshi Khushi was the one who is making plan and everything and not letting Arnav to reveal where in Payash its Akssh who knew well and then acting according to their wish and not letting Payal to reveal everything.Actually its Khushi and aksh make things more dramatic where other siblings wants directly and easily these two complicated for everyone.

Khushi is sanka devi afterall...

Unofficial I always like it more than official date...

Thursday its long to go..

Thanks for pm

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Arnav? Lit Prof ? *Twiggy swoons and faints* Romantic poetry.. Aiyyo!! I prefer Coleridge to Byron though.. But if Arnav is the one reciting it, its a different story altogether.

Loved their mature and comfortable romance between Arnav and Khushi. No grand drama, no tragedies. In fact you highlighted their love for their siblings more than their romance, really liked that.

But my favorite here was Akash - what a lovely brother, and what a wonderful lover. I saw hint of what Arnav was for Anjali in the show.. except this one is a lot more mature, thank you for that. Lovely :)

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Awesome story Semanti...

Both Arshi and Payash know abt each other and are trying to get each other together...and the inspiration being the crazy filmy plan khushi had cooked to get Payash together in IPK...wow...

It was a short story but a welcome change to see khushi and arnav as mature adults sorting out their relationship while trying to help their siblings...or so they thought...😉

Its hard for me to imagine Akash and Payal in the khushi accident scene...That was a huge turning point in IPK when Arnav fears losing khushi and begins to realise the enormity of his feelings for khushi...regretting how he told her she does not mean anything and understanding she means so much...

Loved it and waiting for more...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Aur mein agayi...likhti hoon padhne ke baad.

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A FAB FAB Story...

Aab mein kya baloon...Meri bolti hi band ho gayi hain.

With all the twists that were going around don't think reading it once will suffice, kafi baar padhna padega to remember the various twists that you put in and the almost character swap that you had going in the story.

Let me see if i can recount all of the magic that you unleashed...

Kushi's age and past showed me glimpses of Anji and also her willingness to move on after discovering the truth of her cheating swine hubby 'Nishant' haan expelji even i am joining i hate nishant club.😊

Akash was mind blowing for a change he stepped out of the shadows of the original ASR and showed that he also has the Singh Raizada genes in the true sense but you made him a Gupta here...chalega. Der aye durust aye.

Payal almost reminded me of Khushi.

What do i say about the sexual explosion that took place between Akash and Payal...

Reminded me of our original Arnav and khushi. You know somewhere as i was reading i felt that you did a total personality swap and Akash-PAyal were in true sense Arnav-Khushi and vice versa.

I hope i am being coherent here and you are getting the drift of what i am trying to say.

But Arnav-Khushi in the form of Payash were also dreamy couple here...What do i say about the deceptively platonic hand-hold

So ya though we did predict that it would be getting Payal-akash together track did not even think that the story would unfold the way it did...👏

Loved this badi wali khushi and badawala arnav with some grey hair and their little attempt in bringing their siblings together along with their sparring and jibes...

The cliff scene that you mentioned was just awesome...😆

Hope i have covered all the points in case not main wapas jaroor aungi!!!!!

Getting ready to fall in love on thursday...😳

Liza

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Ahhh--- you swapped them .. Khushi is elder , Khushi had the broken marriage... and Akash is her brother... nice!!

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

That was an amazinggg update!!!

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Updated on page 10 - 81306474

So now its Expel's turn to make us all fall in love, again, on thursday.

Waiting. But reading this again while I do.

j&s phan4eva

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

I particularly loved the part where they just hold hands under the table. They don't need grand gestures to express what they feel.

In the beginning I thought Arnav and Khushi are just friends here.

You sprung a surprise when you mentioned there upcoming wedding.

Loved the sarcastic comments.

Love this Arnav with aviators and jacket, sprouting romantic poetry to fifteen young girls.

I widh and hope(like Shree before me) that this series goes on and on endlessly and you both keep writing these lovely stories.

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Fantastic chapter
Ok so here akash and payal r more cunning then arnav and khushi
Loved how they were playing cupid for each other

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nnhk

@nnhk

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

All that was visible over a pair of lean, tanned arms folded on the table was an unruly head of blue-black hair. The sunlight streaming in through the window caught the occasional strand of grey, turning it silver.

i am a sucker for salt and pepper hair and i stopped after this for about a few minutes to actually visualize him with that hair.

"I heard that." He shot back.

"You were meant to." Khushi smirked at him.

reminded me of the episode where he is going to Agra and asks her to accompany him and she refuses.

He reached out under the wrought iron table and grasped Khushi's hand in her lap, tightening his hand around the cold fingers, engulfing them in his warmth and reassurance.

Khushi looked up at him again, the mask back in place. She smiled beatifically at him and winked, causing him to break out in a grin. The hand stayed in place though, rubbing comforting circles on the back of her palm with his thumb.

you had me dead there .

loved it, beautifully written