Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete*

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mkd4020

@mkd4020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow... That was so beautifuly written... I am in love with this Arnav, of whom we were given snap shots in the show, I, mean during the wedding and then mission get-khushi-back.

I wonder though, why is khushi avoiding Arnav. Guess something like ''the new year resolution plot'' must be going that dimag of hers...

Kindly update soon... Pls pls pls pls and some pretty pls also with cherries on top...

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I'm so very late😭

This is because of you Nafisa . I was continuously checking MDJND and NYR for an update and the little time I was offline you have posted a new Twoshot😔 . par uske liye bhi tumhe maaf kar deti hoon just for of this

let's pretend that Shyam fell down the stairs, broke both his legs, got a concussion and is now living in a pineapple farm. Ok? Ok. 😃

This one reminded me of all those reasons why I love Arnav Singh Raizada in the first place😳

The predatory gleam in his eyes,the roguish smirk,the devilish remarks and the oh-so-blush-inducing innuendos .

The love,the longing and the ache caused by the separation was starkingly evident in Arnav's thoughts.The way his eyes were stuck on Khushi...hay mein mar jawa😆

And when he followed her to the kitchen and was flustering her, reducing her to to a quivering mess,shaking like a leaf inside but putting a brave face outside *swoons*

Moments which captured my heart

It was incongruous, it was eccentric, it was quirky – and it was quintessentially Khushi.

It swept over him like the shimmery caress of rain, washing off the grit and grime gathering on leaves and trees, rinsing them.

Rejuvenating them.

The farther she ran, the harder he'd give chase.

. As he tugged her back to face him, her fiery eyes flashed at him in defiance – and his heart sang its triumph.

Now THERE's the Khushi I know and lo-

Ahem.

Khushi, head hanging like a sullen little child, was mumbling disconsolately, 'Well, Buaji isn't allowed much sugar either and neither is Nani, and Mamiji is also on a sugar-free diet and-'

'That's too bad though,' Arnav cut in whispering lightly, 'I don't like sharing.'

'Delicious.'

And then, with a wicked grin and heart-stopping wink-

'And so was the laddoo.

🤗for giving this amazing piece of work and making my day.

I want MDJND update because I feel that the story is in a crucial juncture now.😊

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Nice one. Reminded me of golden days of IPK.
Waiting for part 2.
I wish you update NYR first. I have been dying to know abt Arnav's POV which you wickedly keep pushing away! 😭

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Beautiful update. I just love the way you write.

I loved the Arnav in this story. So romantic.

Pl update the 2nd part soon and send me a PM.

Also pl update the other stories also , any one you choose to do first. Pl also update; "A seires of Most Fortunate events"

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Loved it.
Please do continue it or I will spam this thread like a crazy girl 😆.
And please please update MDJND first?
Thanks forcthe PM
God bless
Jenna

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Ohhh that was awesome. I was reading mesmerized by each word you had written. I could actually imagine our fav pair close to each other with all the sparks flying... pls do continue

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

You've got me swooning over Arnav and
Khushi! Love it! Can't wait for the next part!

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arsh_18

@arsh_18

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Oh dear Lord what a wonderfully written story once again Nafisa :D

All through the story I could feel/see the crackling chemistry between A & K like it was all happening right in front of my eyes.

And that last line -

'Delicious.'

And then, with a wicked grin and heart-stopping wink-

'And so was the laddoo.'

Hayye <3

I think I died and went to heaven and then came back to earth with that one line. So quintessentially Arnav - roguish and downright sexy ;)

Nafisa, you write so very brilliantly, that I DEMAND (in the nicest, most polite way possible) a quick update of part 2 :P.

Favorite moments in this update -

'You made sugar-free sweets for me?'

And his heart was palpitating again, just like a teenager mooning over his first crush.

His first love.

And every line of Arnav psychoanalysing Khushi's every action, every expression. Sigh! what have you done to my head NAfisa? It's turned into a pile of mush, with no coherent thought except a long suffering 'Haaye...' :P

Edited by arsh_18 - 12 years ago