Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete*

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

That was lovely! Nice to see a wicked flirty Arnav! They both understand whats happening and while one is trying to run away from it scared of what it does to her heart and well being :-) the other revels in feelings that it evokes in him!

Love to read what happens next!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

This was a good flashback to the flirty Arnav during Payash wedding. It's so cute to wach him tease her mercilessly like that. She was avoiding him but then dressed up to tempt him, I am sure. Oh the wicked games these 2 play. Plea continue.

I love Mohabbat Door Janne NA De, so pls update this one for me pls, pls, pretty pls?

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.Melody.

@.Melody.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wow:) amazing os:) wanna read next part soon. . Just loved the words of arnav ' i can resist anything but temptation. You have written it too well. Hope to see the next part seen. Just loved to this flirting arnav and bewildered khushi. They were awesome. Thanks for the pm!

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

To me the funniest part was "..in fact, let's pretend that Shyam fell down the stairs, broke both his legs, got a concussion and is now living in a pineapple farm. Ok? Ok. "

ROFL.. Shyam in a pineapple farm.. may his rear be pricked every second.. Is that why you chose to banish him to a pineapple farm?

And the mesmerizing part of the story was every other part of it. I could not help notice how Arnav spoke so less and with your writing you conveyed every emotion, every answer to Kushi's questions. I was transported to Arshi land while reading this. Please write. The Arshi interaction was magical. I felt every word of what you wrote

Question - Why was Kushi avoiding him for a month? I missed that part. Is that relevant to the story or is it just to set the context?

Oh and please PM me when you update

Edited by FLGirl - 12 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

resolutions please

i don't think there is any other writer who can describe feelings better than you

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

doe eyes, doe eyes, doe eyes...!! *sigh

girl u are an awesome writer...it was magical and breathtaking beautiful...i am in arshiland...!!☺️ ur words hold depth and magic...😃 looking forward to read more...😊

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Beautiful
Loved it
Thanks for writing

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

"Shyam fell down the stairs, broke both his legs, got a concussion and is now living in a pineapple farm."...🤣

Please update part 2 quickly😊

BTW...what about : A series of most fortunate incidents and Mohabbat Door Jaane na de Nafrat paas aane na de ?

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

*long hefty sigh*

What am I supposed to do now -doe-eyes-?

Let's not waste time in talking about how much I loved it. The very fact that I'm commenting vouches for that.

WHAT did I like about it?

Everything.

EVERY-FREAKING-THING!

Your trademark vivid descriptions that paint the most beautiful pictures in front of my eyes.

The subtly changing emotions that flit through Arnav and are gone before you can entirely pin them down.

The incredible pull and attraction between Arnav and Khushi that is ever present no matter how much they try to ignore it, deny it or suppress it.

Khushi's nervous trepidation and uncertainty.

The fascinating dynamics of their relationship.

The gentle suggestion in Arnav's dialogues.

His devastating charm and her innocent allure.

Their almost synchronised back and forth like a careful game of chess.

You always manage to covey every slight shift, their enormous sexual chemistry underlined by something so much more meaningful and the entire background so eloquently and without any overt statements and I'm left mesmerized every time.

Your writing works just like good cinematography does, rendering an ordinary scene poetic and hauntingly beautiful-- one of the reasons I first fell in love with IPKKND in fact!

You have a rather promising future in story-boarding and screenplay writing if you should so choose!

I'm just going to go back and fangirl some more over your flawlessness and try to calm down.

P.S. Mr. Wilde would have approved. He was all about the importance of aestheticism in art, and art for art's sake.