Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete*

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

anything but temptation? that was hot.

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desisoaps05

@desisoaps05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

As usual- THAT WAS SOOO CUTE! I LOVED IT. Of course you should continue! (and everything else you write too :P )

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Count me in! Loved it! As for what to update first, well, you know my answer...MDJND! It's my absolute favourite!

Anyways, if you update and I don't respond, that's because I'm writing Medical licensing exam. Wish me luck! :)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

LOVED THE OS BEAUTIFULLY DONE LOVED HOW SHE KNEW WHERE IS WAS THAT HIS EYES WERE GOING TO BE ON HERS AND SO CUTE HE KNEW SHE MADE THE SUGAR FREE SWEETS FOR HIM LOVED HOW HE WAS TEASING HER AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT BEAUTIFULLY DONE AND MY ANSWER IS MDJND THANKS FOR THE PM

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Loved it!! Can't wait for part 2😛 I also loved your version of what happened to Shyam...why couldn't the writers on the show have thought of that ?😉

Thanks for the PM.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

to me, arnav and khushi's relationship has always been about gestures, the palpable silences, the heated gazes, the stolen touches. thank you for bringing that aspect of the relationship in ur writing. it was so damn sexy

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

you always write beautifully! oh my this arnav is so...what is the word? yes "delicious" lol.

I can't wait till you update the second part!

I prefer you update new year resolutions first also I love MDJND too

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Shyam in the pineapple farm ...ha ha ha!

Loved it, the memories of the best kind of interaction between these two,,,so brilliantly written, so vivid that I could imagine it so clearly...the way you described his emotions and his point of view to the sound of her laugh, her bangles and her...amazing! Waiting eagerly for the next part!