Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete* - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear ofcourse u should cont soon
is that a question??
do the update tomorrow plzz😉
it was awesome and exciting
i loved it
i love this Arnav who is been enthralled by his temptress khushi 😃
i am anticipating for an fitting acknowledgement from khushi 😆
the title is too tempting to read and comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
I loved it!!!!
Specially the last line omg!!!! How the hell is she resisting!!!!
Great os cant wait for the next part...
Is she avoiding him cuz of the diwali incident...
Continue soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow very nice...
I like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Wow,,, that was beautiful !
Like i have said earlier ...Your writing is always so poetic ...it leaves me in a trance like state !😳

MDJND !
MDJND !
MDJND !
MDJND !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Res res
----------Unres
Beautiful...
Bringing all those memories back of Akash n Payal's wedding...
How he ate laddo from her hand n Last two lines were just aaawww...Pleeejjj Do continue it...
Why khushi is avoiding him? Next update will tell...What will b khushi's next reaction to his mischievous actions...?Next update will tell...so My dear writer pllzz continue it...
Yess i definitly want to read MDJND first...
Thannnxxx alloot for pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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brought back the magic that was an integral part of the arnav-khushi interactions... arnav missing khushi, totally mesmerised by her appearance in the saree and the music her anklets and bangles made was amazing... he curbing his ire at khushi avoiding him was unexpected... [a lovely analogy by the way: with the sharp sizzle of spices being tossed into hot oil!] one would expect him to raise the roof when he doesn't get what he wants... his cat and mouse game with khushi brought back some happy memories... always loved the naughty side to him when he flirted outrageously with her to fluster her... nice ploy by him, pretending to eat that sugar-filled sweet, knowing full well that her concern for him would make her come to him... getting his feisty khushi back was like a soothing balm to him... he bending over her hand and glancing up at her through his eyelashes reminded me of the scene when he does so while gently removing, with his teeth, the bangle shard from her wrist! the last few lines of tonight's update were especially beautiful, showing arnav in his element, and leaving us all hyperventilating just like khushi: ...swallowed up the laddoo Khushi had confiscated from him – and nipping at her fingers for good measure. Khushi yelped and yanked her wrist out of his grasp, gripping it with her other hand to her chest, her stare mortified and twin blazes of scarlet burning against her cheeks, as Arnav regained his height, deliberately flicking his tongue out to sweep at leftover crumbs, before declaring, 'Delicious.' And then, with a wicked grin and heart-stopping wink, 'And so was the laddoo.'
the words you used to describe arnav equating khushi's tinkling laughter to the rain and its rejuvenating properties were just beautiful... arnav has totally fallen for khushi, however much he might want to deny it... he happy at her unwittingly interrupting his self-confession that he was in love with her was another adorable moment... can't wait to see how things play out!
As I am a reader of NYR, and as it it is poised at an interesting juncture, I hope you would update that next, but I leave the choice to you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply awesome. But why is Khushi avoiding him. Arnav has become naughty. 😉

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful loving it so far
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant and fabulous start to the two shot, I just love your writing its absolutely phenomenal and the update was written beautifully and exceptionally well. So poor Arnav was getting so frustrated because khushi had been ignoring him for 4 weeks, loved the kitchen scene it was simply superb. Loved the part where Arnav said he can resist everything apart from temptation and also loved the way he tried to get khushi's attention by eating the Laddoo with the sugar in it and it worked. The ending was amazing when Arnav said delicious and he was implying it to khushi and then said also to the Laddoo. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!!

Absolutely brilliant writing!!

So much tension, emotion and the undeniable chemistry...haye...I do miss the early good old IPK days.

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