virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
hai guys , iam here with the part9. iam really sorry for the late update guys, iam really sorry. so here is the next part. read it and comment.

Make a relationship with someone who is not only proud to have u but will take every risk just to be with u

PART 9


They both goes to their class room.
Afternoon, maya and manvi in canteen.

Maya : mannu, y r u looking so tired? I forget to ask u that in morning. looks ur eyes ... u didn't sleep yesterday?

Manvi : nothing maya, iam fine.

Maya : I can see that u r fine. mannu, what happened? tell me the truth...

Manvi told her everything that what happend in yesterday in house. maya felt very angry when she heard that.

maya : whats their problem if u r with my dada? u know mannu, if iam in ur place I will kill that two devils definitly.

manvi : maya, relax...

That's time mayas phone started to ring. she looked the caller id

maya : its my dada...

she attend the call

maya : hey dada, where r u?

virat : hey chutki, iam in home. where r u?

maya : me and manvi in canteen now. we dont have any class afternoon. v r free

virat : so... whats ur programme?

maya : hey dada, r u free now?

virat : s chutli, iam free. what?

maya : dada, today I didn't take my car. so can u pick me and manci from colleg? pls...

virat : hey, manvi is came with u chutki?

maya (smiling) : s dada, what happened? u hav any problem for that?

virat : problem? for what? chutki... u know that iam happy for that.

maya : I know dada... anyway pick us from here... ok?

virat : ok chutki, u guys wait there. I will came there to pick u both within 10 mints.

maya : ok dada

maya cut the call and looked manvi.

maya : mannu, dada came here for pick us, come on...

manvi : u mean virat ji is came here to pick us?

maya : yeah, hey mannu... tell me one thing, how is my dada?

manvi : what? what u mean maya?

maya : I ask u that how is my dada? sweet or cute or hot or dashing or handsome?

manvi just checked mayas forehead.

manvi : maya, r u ok?

maya : mannu, iam ok. u just answer my question? how is my dada?

manvi : virat ji, he is so nice person...

maya : so u want to love him?

manvi : what? r u mad?

maya : no, iam perfectly alright...

That's time mayas phone started to ring. she picked the call.

maya : where r u dada?

virat : chutki, iam in ur college parking area... where r u guys?

maya : wait there dada, we will there with in seconds.

virat : ok come fast...

maya(in a low voice) : u r very excited to see my mannu?????

virat : shut up chutki

maya : ok dada

she cut the call.

maya : mannu, come... dada is here...

They both goes to the parking area.

In parking area

virat : where r they?

That's time some girls came in the parking area. They all looked him in a sexy way.

virat : y r they all looking me like that?

"bcoz my dada looking so hot" he heard mayas voice from behind. He turned back. He saw that maya and manvi is standing there.

virat : hey chutki...

maya : hey dada...

she come and hugged him. he too hugged her. manvi just looked at them. They broke the hug. virat looked manvi. she looks so tired. He understand that she didn't sleep yesterday night.

virat : hai manvi...

manvi : hai...

maya just looked both of them.

Maya (in her thought) :how perfect they r . cute pair. maid for eachother.

Then manvi and virat looked maya and saw that she is in a deep thought

virat : chutki, what happend?

maya ( in her dream land) : so sweet ...

virat ( confuesingly) : what??

maya came back to her sense.

maya : what? did u tell something dada?

virat : nothing, come, lets go...

They all goes towards the car. when they reached the car, maya & virat looked each other. maya understand that what her dada wants. she nodded her head and smiled at him.

maya : mannu, u sit in front seat. I have a little pain in my head. I want to sleep some time. so I will sit in the backseat.

she didn't let manvi to speak. she grabbed her hand and make her to sit in the front passenger seat and then she get in the back seat.

virat (in thought) : u r good chutki,

virat get in to the car and started the car. he looked manvi.

virat : hey guys , where r we going?

maya : beach...

virman : beach,,?????

maya : what? u guys didn't heard the word before?

manvi : but maya, y r v going beach mannu?

maya ( to virat ) : bcoz dada,




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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
awesome update
love maya
she directly asked manvi abt her dada😆
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by virman.lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
ur story so good i am not feeling well but as soon as i saw that u updated i couldnt uelp my self to read ur story it. was awesome cant wait to no what. is goona hapen next i just wsh virat sees how manvi family behave with her and he feels angry and takes manvi to his house and manvi.goes i would be so.happy if that happens
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hy that,s not fair i want more dear it,s so short bt lov ur whole update mhuwaaa n i lov maya she is such a darling omg virman is going beach o want soon update n want hot n romantic update plz 😃 n tx 4 pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update..
Pleasee update soon..
And thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb
like it
fab work
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
loved Maya
trying to help virat
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
thanks for updating
pls update soon
thankss for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update maya planning to get
both them to spend update soon

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