virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virman.lover

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awesome update

love maya

she directly asked manvi abt her dada😆

continue soon

thanks for the pm



thanx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊



thank u yaarrr
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: myvirman

ur story so good i am not feeling well but as soon as i saw that u updated i couldnt uelp my self to read ur story it. was awesome cant wait to no what. is goona hapen next i just wsh virat sees how manvi family behave with her and he feels angry and takes manvi to his house and manvi.goes i would be so.happy if that happens



thanx & get well soon dear

ofcourse virat will save her dear but he want to wait for that
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mira4

Hy that,s not fair i want more dear it,s so short bt lov ur whole update mhuwaaa n i lov maya she is such a darling omg virman is going beach o want soon update n want hot n romantic update plz 😃 n tx 4 pm dear


thanx yaar
maya is really darling sis
yup virman in beach
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Lovely update..

Pleasee update soon..

And thanks for the PM..



thank u & will try to update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angleroops

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">thanks for updating</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">pls update soon</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">thankss for pm</font>



thanx dear & try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update maya planning to get
both them to spend update soon



thanx dear & will try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Maya is so sweet
Plz cont soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Do not feel for who is going away from u , but dont give chance for loveable ones to go away from u


hai guys, iam here with the next pt of my story. First I wish all of u a very very very very HAPPY NEW YEAR. LOVE u all...

PART 10


manvi : but maya, y r v going beach now?

maya : nothing mannu, I just want to go. pls dada...

virat : ok meri maa...

manvi : but maya, I cant come...

maya : no mannu, u too come with us and dont worry we will drop u in ur home before 4.30 pm and Tanya have class till 5 pm. so u need to worry about her too. so now just smile...

manvi smiled at her

maya : that like my mannu

maya looked virat and smile at him.

virat start the car, but the corner of his eyes staring to manvi very carefully. he can see the sadness and tiredness very clearly in her face. virat want to make her his and gave her all the happiness. But for that he want wait. But how long? He dont know that.

After sometimes
virat stopped the car.

Virat : manvi, v reached

Manvi looked back seat. there maya is in very deep sleep.

virat : chutki, wake up, v r reached

manvi : maya, wake up...

maya : V reached very fastly...

manvi : fastly? maya v take 45 mints

maya : oh, iam sorry mannu, sorry dada

virat : sorry for wat chutki? now get up and come

They three of them get out from the car and walked towards the beach.



Actually they dont know what to do? Manvi looked maya, maya looked virat, virat looked manvi.

virat : now what we do chutki?

maya : actually dada, I dont know what to do? ok, now we can sit in sand.

Three of them sat in the sand.

Maya : dada, there is ice cream. give me money. I will go and buy. mannu, which flavour do u want? & dada u ?

virman : chocklate

They said together and looked eachother. virat smiled at her.

maya : ok, I too want chocolate. i'll be back dada.

maya goes from there to buy ice cream.
Now virman alone there.

virat : manvi, can I ask u one thing?

manvi : ji?

virat : didn't u sleep yesterday night? dnt try to tell the lie bcoz its clearly visible in ur face. How can u tolerate all these torture from them manvi?


manvi get up from the sand and looked into the sea. Virat to get up from sand.

virat : manvi, u r a indian citizen and u have all the rights to live ur life in ur own likes. u dont need to follow anyones orders.

manvi : virat ji, u r right. but I cant live my life in my own. bcoz how can I? Now I hav a shelter. if I protest them I will lost that. iam a girl. where can I go?

virat (thought) : dont worry manvi, iam here for u. I will save u from that devils as soon as possible. Nothing will going to happend u.

Virat placed his hand on her shoulder. she looked him. her eyes is filled with tears. she want to cry her heartout. all these days she kept her feeling in her inside. but now he want to let it out. she really want to cry. Virat understand it. he felt like to hug her. so he didn't goes to think another second. he hugged her. manvi too want this. she too hugged him and cried her heartout. virat felt that his shirt is going wet.

virat : dont worry manvi, everything is going to be fine. u will everything in ur life. so dont worry

After sometimes manvi understand that what is she doing and soon broke the hug.

manvi : iam sorry virat ji, really sorry...

virat : u dont need to say sorry manvi, I can understand ur feelings. manvi, I want to ask u one more thing. can I?

manvi : yes virat ji...

virat : I asked this question to u before. but one more time. Dont u have any dreams about ur marriage? a small family in ur own.

manvi : marriage is a beautyful thing that happens in everyones life. I too have my own dreams about my marriage. but dont know when its going to happens in my life? I think its better to forget about marriage.




ok guys, will try to update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
feel bad for manvi
hope virman get married soon
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by virman.lover - 11 years ago

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