virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love is just a word until someone comes along and gives it meaning

Guys iam really sorry for the lat update. pls forgive me guys. my system was not work. now iam in internet cafe . now here is the next part. read it and enjoy. and dont 4get to comment

PART 8

Night
Virat was standing in terrace of his room. He is thinking about Maanvi . Thats time Maya came there.

Maya : dada , u didnt sleep?

Virat : No chutki...

Maya : what r u thinking about dada? Is this about Mannu?

virat : yes... what ? no, no...

Maya : dada , i know u werry well , so dont try to tell the lie to me.

Virat came to his room and sit in bed. maya followed him.

virat : hey chutki , come and sit with me.

maya goes and sit with him.

maya : now tell me dada , u thinking about mannu ? am i right?

virat : yes chutki , u r right?

maya : dada , do u love her?

virat : i dont know chutki , but i cant think anything except her, my mind is full of maanvi . i dont know y ?

maya : the answer is very simple dada , u love her . oh my god , my dada loves my mannu.

virat : love? ... yes chutki , u r right . I LOVE HER...

maya : wow , thats so cute. so mannu is going to be my bhabhi , But i dont call her bhabhi , i just call her mannu. bcoz she is my frnd. my best frnd. ok dada ? so i just call...

she cut off by virat.

virat : chutki , u talking too much

maya : oh , iam sorry dada , dada , u just go and tell her that u love her, now...

virat : chutki , r u mad? its mid night

maya : oh , u r right dada , its ok . here is my phone... u just call her and tell her that ... no,no... i think she is sleeping now , dada , tomorrow u too came with me to my college. no,no... i think i must invite her to our house. Am i right dada? And ur & mannus marrige... I think we want to booked a wedding hall for that. And i will decorate ur bed room... ok dada? And dada...

virat : chutki , relax dear... just relax... Breath in... , breath out... , breath in... , breath out... u ok?

maya : yes dada, iam ok

virat : chutki, i just say that i love her and u started to planned about our marriage. Relax chutki...

maya : iam sorry dada , iam little excited. U know , my mannu is so good girl . she is so perfect for u dada. she is so sweet...

virat : and me?

maya : u too so sweet and lovely

virat ; ok chutki , now iam so happy. ok, go to urbed and sleep. iam feeling very sleepy.

maya : ok dada . iam too feeling very sleepy. gud nyt and sweet dreams about my mannu...

virat : chutki, u ...

she ran from there. maya is get in her room. thats time her phone is started to ring. she looked the caller id.

maya : anoop? this time... Now idont have any mood to pick any call...

she didnt attend the call. Its again started to ring. This time she picked the call.

"Hello.." she heard Anoops voice from the other side.

maya : " The subscriber u have trying to reach is now going to bed to sleep. so try again morning"

After this she cut the call andgoes to her bed to sleep.

Next morning , collage

maya was waiting for maanvi in parking area. she was verry happy. thats time she saw that maanvi is coming. maya run towards her and gugged her very tightly.

maanvi : maya , what happend? u looking verry happy today . what happend?

maya : wow mannu , u looking very beautiful

maanvi : what happend maya ? y r u so happy?

maya : nothing, but iam feeling very happy. ok , come , lets go to our class room.

They both goes to their class room.


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here is the pt 8 guys, u guys like it. pls comment and hit the like button too. i know its a short update. i cant post the next pt so soon guys. but i will try



love u all...
ACHU... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally virat realised he love manvi thats sooo awesome...excited too see what happens next ...
and seeing maya's excitment is soo awesome...
thanx alott for the pm ...update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update finally he realise
his feeling toward her update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved this os

all part is nice

continue soonnn...
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for update
fab part...
Like it
waiting for next part
plz try to soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
finally virat realised his love
continue soon
plz pm me
update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
finally virat realised his love
continue soon

Achulovesrain thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
achu , where is the update yaarrr

pls update next part very sooonnn





Edited by silpasivan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Liked it
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz update dear plz want update

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