virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hai guys iam achu. iam here with a virman os. here i will give u the prologue. u guys read it and tell me that can i continue it or not ?


VIRMAN OS : IAM NOTHING WITHOUT U

PROLOGUE
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Maanvi and Maya r the best frnds in college. They both shared all sadness & happiness eachother . Maanvi is very innocent girl. She lost her mother in her childhood. Then her father Mr.Raghav, he is a rich man ,married another women mamed Girija. In that relationship he have a daughter named Tanya. She studying Maanvis college too.

Girija & Tanya doesnt like Maanvi. Few months before her father died in an accident. Then Giriga & Tanya treated her as a servent. Maanvi dont have any courage to protest them. She did all the job what they said. Maya know all this things. Somany times she said to Maanvi that came to her house and stay there. But Maanvi didnt agree that.

Now Maanvis all property in Girijas hand . But all the properties in maanvis name. But poor Maanvi dont know about it.

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here it is guys. u guys like it? can i continue or stop here? pls hit like button & comment

bye, gud nyt guys...
tc...

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Achu

pt1 -pg2
pt2 -pg5
pt3 -pg7
Pt4 -pg10
pt5 -pg13
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.aliyah. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww ... this sounds so Cindareallaish... I can't wait for our Prince to be introduced 😆

Please do continue. I personally think its going to be a great story. The concepts different from others and I am looking forward to it.

and Maya is Mannu's best friend? 😲

Thanks for the prologue!! It was great 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow its just amazing i loved it sooo much poor maanvi . i would like to have the pm of ur updates please do continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting ...its like a fairytale
maya and manvi are frends😆
update next part soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely os
very interesting
plzzz plzzz continue and plzzz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just absolutely love it, please continue soon, can't wait till the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept plzz plzzz do cont soon the prologue is nice n manvi all innocent...n maya manvi's best frnd why is everyone in IF trying to make maya a good girl😆... well like it...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept...great start...continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting nice prologe pls continue... Do pm me
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hey achu, its really nice dear
maya maanvis best friend. i like ur concept. its really intresting. update pt1 soon & pls pm me

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