OS - And then it rained.

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

This was Amazing beautiful...
How u brought soo much emotions in one single shot...loved it n Love ur writing...
Actuallly in most of FFs,,SSs n OSs always Khushi suffers bcoz of Arnav's wrong attitude but there Arnav suffered becoz of Her...Loved the rain scene where her tears blended in it...
This is just aawweesome dear...

Quote

Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

😃

Thanks K ... 🤗

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

The os was simply amazing
the pain of seperation clearly visible
lvd d ending as i m a sucker for happy endings
u r an amazing writer i must say
thanks a ton for d pm i m highly obliged

Quote

saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Y0u can never experience happiness if y0u havent experienced saddness. Likewise there is rain and the clear sky that f0ll0ws is w0nderful

Quote

A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Thanks for the PM!

Beautiful story. The way you captured their emotions over their separation was really touching.

Jay has a lot of wisdom for a 7 year old! Really liked his part in the story.

Quote

Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

This was so wonderful... Cute

Quote

Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Brilliant and amazing, all I want to say is "I DO" love this one shot, it was emotioanl but written beautifully and exceptionally well. Loving jay he is so mature and made khushi realise that she still loved Arnav and asked her to give him another chance as he had never left her side for the past 14 months. Loved the beautiful reunion at the end, awww khushi asked Arnav why he had let her leave, just beautiful and a perfect end. Thanks for the PM xx

Quote

@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

wow ...absolutely brilliant loved it

Quote

suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

that was beautiful..

to think of the reasons why we give up on a relationship can give so much perspective. Rather whensomeone else asks why. Because we keep repeating the same reasons again and again in our head until those are the only words we can remember.

Jay's questions were simple and yet real - to think of the wife-beaters and the drunk husbands, to think of marriages with no words and no love, brings back reality.

Although dealing with a loss of life can cause a rift too many times only because different people have different ways to deal with the same pain..

Nice one :)