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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

this was beautiful klyaani...just like all your stories...

wow he checked in her for all those 14 months because she took his heart with her, how could he let herr go...

this is just amazing...love the happily ever afterr...and love jay...such a sensible kid...

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Very powerful story
Wish people would understand that everybody had a different way of dealing with loss, pain or death
Jay is a very smart kid

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emistry

@emistry

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Wow! Nicely done!! That was really well written... The way she just unleashed her pent up anger and sorrow and he could just bring it down with two words of I do!! Brilliant!

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Gosh I hope ypu never stop writing on these two. This was beautiful, poignant and love reaffirmed, Many questions Khushi may have asked herself and never found the answers she was looking for yet the simple one asked by JayPrakash, do you love him.?..answered them all. Arnav watched her daily for 14 months, that's love..that's dedication and that's keeping his promise to never leave her..

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Your OSs are always unique and wonderful and this one was too.
Enjoyed reading this OS.Thanks!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

lovely di...

tht was really a touching one...

loved it...

thnks for the PM...

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simran

@Laters_Baby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Talkng frm strtng di
itz wndrful title quotes it selfsay the stry of lv pain sepration.
They lost there baby nd she blamed hm
nd lft hm
when he askd that she left evrytng ahe didnt thought she iz talkng mst imp thng hs heart wd hr.
Lvd d way lil jay askd hr
Nd the endng ws awesmm
lvd the way u xpresssd the wrds
he visitd to see hr evryday nd she took it as hallucation
nd the wy he said i do ws so painful
lvd it

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

K, I am so happy I read this OS, I don't even know what to say!

I was stalking the cc when you mentioned about the new OS you'd written and I knew just then I HAD TO READ IT.

To say it was articulately beautiful would be an understatement. This was beyond beautiful.

A simple, yet love inspiring one shot that at the end can invigorate the hopeless person with hope and love.

Khushi and Arnav are characters close to my heart, so to have read something about them is a pleasure in itself; then to have it written by you, is a cherry on the icing! :)

There were some fabulous dialogues in the OS when the little boy questions her about Arnav and the realization that breaks upon Khushi of the simplicity that love is bound with- Just to have to love the person and have him love you back.

He used to come over just to see to her well being for fourteen long months? No wonder he's my hero 😳

Lovely Lovely Lovelyy! ⭐️

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

How did I forget these lines? They inspire me for some reason!

Everyone wants happiness
Nobody wants pain
But you can't have a rainbow
Without a little rain

...and then it rained. :)

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

I cant tell you in words how much I loved it. There s loss,pain,longing and most importantly hope and union. Lovely shot. Plus a vivid imagery was the cherry on the cake.

Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago

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