OS - And then it rained.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

K!!

This was truly a wonderful surprise😳😳

I logged into my account to see a new OS by K where I had already resed😆😆😆

I knew it!! I knew it dammit!! No matter how many times you tell me you hate me maan hi maan mein you love me lots and care for me☺️ while I am meant nothing to the others😡😡😡

I know it very well you love me much much more than you love that sanki saiyu, nalayak La, pagal pari and that lazy zee 😆... you just do drama of loving them so that they don't get hurt, hain na??😃😃😃

Un'Res

Such a beautiful OS K👏👏... you are such an amazing writer😃

I loved the banner and the quote "Everybody wants happiness... nobody wants pain...but you can't have a rainbow...without a little rain"

This quote is so going to become my fb status😆

I loved Jay... his wisdom...

"Your man" he said the words before he could check them and looked at her to be admonished and when he heard nothing from her he smiled hesitantly. "Did he drink and beat you every day?" she heard him ask seriously and shook her head in the negative. "Did he not give you food and clothes?" he asked next earning a wan smile from Khushi, again the answer was negative. After many questions to which every answer was in the negative, Jay asked his final question

"Don't you love him, Memsaab?"

This four dialogues were so... I don't even know what to say😲

Khushi blamed Arnav for losing her child and Arnav let her go because he knew no matter what he said he won't be able to stop her... but he kept his promise...he took care of her without even letting her know :')

I'm glad you gave this a happy ending varna tujhe mein dekh leti😡😡😡

😆😆😆

I know I'm rambling... thanks again for the dedication and keep praying for me babes :)

Humbhi aap se I love you dammit😳😳😳

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

La :)

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Sami !!! Main nalayak hun ?? 😕

K like I already told you, I loved it :)
You write so awesome :) Since I haven't yet read your other two stories how could I miss commenting on this one ?

I unres'd so soon :) This is a record for me...lol

For the past fourteen months he had been coming there everyday to check on her and he went away without even talking ??

She knew he came and she thought he was her hallucination?

He's been coming here everyday ! Even after she told him she had left behind everything that belonged to him ... But she took with her the one thing that mattered most to him ! She belonged to him... How could he not come ??
That is my most favorite part of this story :)

These two are so adept at subjecting themselves to heartbreak when it can easily be cleared by talking :)

He spoke only two words ...yes but those two words and the way he said would've have told her everything she'd have wanted to hear :D

What is love without separation ?? Hai na ??

Loved the happy ending :)

Now they'll have each other and their child 😃

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Oh God!!! Why did I res on the first page!!It should have been one of your talented friends who would have don justice to the update by commenting on the first page

I never find enough words to reflect what I feel...ASR syndrome you see!

Tu jahaan jahaan chalega

Mera saya saath hoga...

He was there always! and the reason was simple...he asked her whether she had returned everything that he gave her...she replied in affirmative and left

But he couldn't just leave the heart which she had taken away with herand for the beating of the one which he had with him!

Loved it dammit!!!

Edited by arnavbarun - 12 years ago

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wowww such a cute OS Kalyaani..loved it

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am at a loss for words to comment on such a poignant OS. I can only say that ...Kalyaani , you weave magic with your words... 👏

Edited by Hriju321 - 12 years ago

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

excitement level ka tu koi haal na tha jaab pm mila, thinking POL update ho gaya , but then this was beautiful...

the rain, the farm, the kid.

Edited by nnhk - 12 years ago

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happypeace

@happypeace

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Posted: 12 years ago

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The OS ws beautiful! the dialogues by Jay of does your husband beat you and others were so heart touching...! he so simply stated and asked the the most important of questions... loved the sensibility...

About Khushi and Arnav what can i say...! their union ws very heartwarming... he continued to take care of her in his way... loved the characters in this OS...

Great piece writing...!

Edited by happypeace - 12 years ago