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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

this ix beautiful n sooo enthralling...
awsm...
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thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Excellently penned... How much rain matter to one person either it worse, remorse, pain or happiness, treasures and so much bt after the rain there is always rainbow which brings colors, n always colors in lives... Arnav ask her whether she leave everything which belong to him little did she understand she belong to him n jst him... Past 14 months he is always with her... She thinks its hallucination.. Swt jay... She work for mango farms... Mango are ripe n swt both but loved by everyone ... As same as life

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Priya

@LoveYouChutki..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awww Such a beautiful OS..
Loved it...

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

that was a beautiful os👏

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

That was just wonderful.. Ur stories always do this to me.. I mean, make me say this..

Coming to it, they had never left each other.. Physically they might have but not emotionally... ❤️ Loved it a lot... Thank you...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Wow..

It was a beautiful OS :)

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Res.

A work by you and I am not on the 1st pg...

Life!

Edited:

You write pain so well...

And then you complain why we call you seriouswali author!

Though Khushi had left everything behind, a life she had known for years, a baby which she didnt get to hold, all of the accompanying pain... doesnt compare to losing him. That is why on a rainy day his thoughts plague her, make her miss him...

The accusation that he didnt want her to have the baby just because his sister didnt have one, was so mean. If I were Arnav I would have broken then and there

I loved Arnav. She could walk away. He couldnt.

But he didnt impose himself on her. He waited for her to realise that what she had lost- the baby and each other, and he had been nothing but loving to her, even controlling his pain and anguish when she was a mess...

It is not everyday we read about such an Arnav or such a Khushi...

I loved it :)

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

The beauty of your words has always been evident, KBR. One only has to read a few chapters of the two epics you are penning to know

But the highlight of this piece is the simplicity of its emotion - the insecurity of a loved one, hurt that comes from shared grief and the innocence of some very forthright questions from a bystander

As always, you outshine yourself. But then, who ever doubted that!