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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Such a lovely OS. ARHI and rain always a deadly combination. I loved the banner and the quote in it..
Khusi left Arnav n their home blaming him for everything and Arnav took all on himself silently and continued to look after her behind the scene.. He came everyday just to make sure she's ok .. What a love this is...
Little Jay was awesome..
Arnav only spoke two words "I do" but i guess this speaks everything need to be said in the story...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
What a beautiful way to describe the way a woman feels during a miscarriage - especially the first one. I loved his patience and feel for his silent suffering. He understood why it was harder on her as this child was inside her, a part of her. He gave her space and checked on her in secret. I was fortunate to not have had this experience but watched countless of family and friends go through it, including my sister. However like the quote at the beginning said, you can't have a rainbow, without a little of rain.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Such cute and beautifully written OS Kalyaani!!!

Arnav never left her…Love it…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
beautiful story...jay is real hero here 😊 n Arnav 🤗 ...
I promise to be there when you need me, I promise to hug you tight when you're lonely, I promise to wipe your tears when they fall and I promise to keep you, not for the rest of my life but for the rest of yours because you are my everything...
thank u so much for this beautiful work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
that is what i call missing the forest for the trees. we wallow in our own misery and forget that others are suffering too.

well done!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kalyaani...I am thinking real hard to find words which will justify this beautiful OS😕. If i say you create magic that will be just a small part of how i feel. Still try i shall... Absolutely loved the banner and the quote..loved the rain and Khushi's thoughts...the words you used for her pain made me feel her pain...loved little Jay and his concern for his memsaab...his questions were innocently intelligent (i dont know if it makes sense)...loved the way he tells his memsaab about Arnav and gets excited for her...Khushi's eagerness to meet Arnav brought smile on my face...loved Arnav for keeping his promise...loved Khushi's question at the end and Arnav's 'I do'...in simple words...i LOVED the OS. Thankyou for this beautiful OS.👏👏👏
ANd thanks a ton for the PM. 🤗❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
loved it... it was really beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
i read it last night while gooing to sleep and it was as beautiful as the first rain in summer
bajata hai jaltarang teal kee chhat pe jab
motiyo jaisa jal barse
bundo kee yeh ladi layi hai woh ghadee
jiske liye ham tarse

rimjhim rimjhim rumjhum rumjhum
bhigee bhigee rut me tum ham ham tum
ho chalte hain, chalte hain

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
This is so good. I loved reading it.

~Dee~

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