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Posted: 12 years ago
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Everybody wants happiness... nobody wants pain...but you can't have a rainbow...without a little rain"...beautiful lines

loved the OS K...it was just breathtakingly beautiful...simple yet elegant with the way the feelings of Khushi was written down...loved it.

Jay...i loved him too...very cute.

K ...this surprize was wonderful👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS, Kalyaani! Cathartic, like you said :) Her grief was so palpable, and admire this Arnav. Jay, children are more insightful that we give them credit for - an innocent question "Don't you love him?" - and the solution to all troubles lied in the answer. And that answer was so simple :)

This OS reminded me of this touching sequence from the classic movie Abhimaan (1973)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJIacQ4Uito[/YOUTUBE]


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear thanks for the pm.

What a beautiful OS. I loved it.😛 M speechless

Arnav was there for Khushi always. He had asked her whether she had left behind everything that belonged to him and she answered Yes but she dint give back his heart which belonged to her❤️

What a beautiful portray of emotions in one OS. You have best described it. Finally Khushi apologized and is ready to start life afresh. Finally Arnav says I DO.

Lovely dear please continue writing such wonderful OS👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a simple story...extremely well told...
The logic of Jay and his uncomplicated thought ...bravo...
We do unnecessarily complicated our lives...either with too much analyss or with too much ego...when the layers are removed..what remains is he simple truth...
Beautifully written...


Thank you for the PM...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
wow kalyaani
that was a super nice OS - rain has always been my favourite
loved the way u brought out the whole story in a small OS - wonderfully written dear - thx for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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she did not leave everything behind...she took his heart with her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Amazing! such a heartwarming 'rainy' reunion :D
each word ws beautifully written..
i love ur one shot Kalyaani.. I DO.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh!! it's raining...😉 raining of emotions... awesome .thanx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its great writing! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Incredibly beautiful piece of writing.

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