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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your update, missed them dearly.
The story of each character is giving a link to other but I still feel that there's one more story that is left.
Also something major from Arnav' story is remaining.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello,

I am on hiatus till 15th of June - at least. I will not be updating any FFs till then. However I am updating Paint It Red at least once in two days - if you are interested, check out: http://rockibarbie.wordpress.com/

I won't be sending PMs for that. It's just writing exploration.

Have a good week everyone!

Thanks,
RB
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Posted: 12 years ago
U r now my most favourite mystery writer
I read the whole chaps in one go
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Posted: 12 years ago
How sad.. Silly games they played during their childhood ended up killing people. Why was Tara the way she was?

What is this new change in Khushi? She seemed more vulnerable than ever before.

Shyam - Oh poor Shyam. If only- The words of utter futility.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too bad you're putting this on hiatus. But things are becoming clearer a little bit.

I think the best thing about this story is that its all through dialogues for the most part. And that makes it exciting because - in a mad house - who is speaking the truth?
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Posted: 12 years ago
thx for the note RB
will miss u - come back safe - will wait for u
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..am gng to miss this since u r gng on a break..enjoy ur brk and come back soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I actually found the ideas of Arnav smiling to be...frightening and absurd. No wonder Khushi snarled at him to just stop that attempt at normalcy. A smile that doesn't reach the eyes is one of the things that affects me the most...I remember this girl I knew at school who had such a pleasant smile, but dead, inexpressive, pale blue eyes. Perfect for Halloween...but I digress. 😆

I find it amusing that Akash and Khushi still consider Arnav to be the Punisher. I wonder if it is...Shy am? Maybe some other character in the story we have been or have yet to be introduced to? Shyam's breakdown will be to no avail if he does not accept the facet of the story that Akash divulged...I question Malvika's intentions when it comes to Shyam. Or should I?

I hope Khushi can grieve...but something tells me there'll be more to disturb her equanimity before this tale is done.
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Arnav isn't the one like i anticipated? Who else?
And Khushi's tale has much more mystery.

And yeah, i read that you are on a much deserving break. We will miss you till then.
Hope 15th comes soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another fab update

Here's why I think Shyam is the punisher
He killed lavanya because he blames her for Anjali dying after the car accident
He killed Akaashs kids because why should they have their kids when he lost his unborn
He killed Tara because he also blamed her for the accident
He killed Arjun cause he helped Tara and then was helping khushi or maybe Arjun found out Shyams truth or was getting close
As for hurting khushi he thinks she is partly responsible so maybe that is why he didn't kill her
N the name punisher suits as he is punishing those for who he feels r guilty for Anjalis death
Wondering if he is punisher if he would try to kill himself too as he didn't stop her for keeping her baby even after knowing how dangerous it was?

Is it just me or was Arnav acting strange either he knows something more than them mayb he already knew about Shyam or maybe hes just figured it out or mayb he just didn't like fact that khushi is angry on him but talking to Akaash
Can't wait to see what's revealed next
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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