ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

This is the sanest update of this story I've read. And by that I don't mean the writing or the story but my own pathetic little brain :) Or maybe because it had more emotion than thought? Or maybe because I've finally become one with the Labyrinth?

I'm off to read the entire story again, RB. I have a feeling, you are going to see a more sane comment from me soon :)

Missed the updates! Thanks for this one

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

wow.. you have got me all tangled... or mind tangled.. i am not sure what to believe.. i would normally start to assume what is coming next or who is the victim and who is punisher but now I think i should just read and not go beyond..

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

Oh, there is no truth! Twisted minds and evil fate, put together you have this labyrinth. Aakash seem to be lucid, but then he could also be insane and very aware of his insanity - that would help him look convincingly lucid.

Khushi, is she devolving too? Or is she evolving? She is slowly coming to terms with all the events in her life, the death of her sister, and the consequences of all that happened in the past.

With Arnav, its impossible to deduce who he is; you can't trust others because he will play them, and you can't trust his actions because again. he is one hell of a schemer. Unless we get a peek inside his head, theres no telling who he is. Oh, and what about his obsession with Khushi ?

Shyam's files hold a lot of keys, but how can one be sure he was lucid when he wrote them? Can one trust whats in those files? Ah, who the hell is the Punisher?

WIld guess - Payal :P

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soophie

@soophie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

finally u hv update.missed ur updates like hell
ana this was an amazing update
like khushi i too wish arnav is not the punisher coz now i m sure khushi is not tara's murderer
so their is more to anjali's story..this is really getting intresting
plzzz continue soon
waiting n thanks for pm
hope u r doing well in ur examz...all d very best

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

i think its shyame he is the punshier
he killed lav and akashas child(ern) and he killed tara
he wanted to kill kushi but couldnt
may be he felt khushi didnt do anything
its shyame
and barbie what about arnie he is LOVE with khsui but why is he nt telling her

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

i too doubt shayam after tis update...the plot has thickened to max , now time for unfolding all the facts ...RB u 've written beautifullly how human psychology works ...keep going...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

😃

Am just a lot more confused than I was earlier ...

and am trying to solve the puzzle that's got even more confusing ...

seeing Shyam breakdown got Khushi more unsettled ...

Arnav remains a mystery ...

Will wait to read more and maybe go through all the chapters again ...

Thanks RB ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1088

Though I liked the update..

I still don't understand a lot of things...like Khushi's oddly vulnerable behavior... why she doesn't want Arnav to be the punisher (does she love him too, in her own twisted way?)... what is in those files which Shyam has...how come Akash suddenly seems so.. normal? I mean, his best friend is suffering and.. he seems quite oddly normal with that fact...

Though I agree with V323, that Shyam is most like the punisher...but I still don't get what is missing. Because something is certainly missing...there are still lot of explaination left about a lot of things..like Arjun's murder..Khushi's story...her sister's death...what is Arnav doing now..

Hope you would update soon.. :)