VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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Afshan

@afshanmk093

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

ah! a nice update by reading only i cn feel manvis helplessness n pain!
the phase she is going thru where no is understanding is really heartaching! i m so glad that virat came at right time made doc shutup n prevent manvi frm getting injection!
her saying hm that she is nt crazy hm assuring her that he believes her was amazing!
the way u connect flashbacks wid present is really interesting!

p.s nisha dnt knw why bt i was nt able to comment on ur blog thats why postd here

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

awesome update finally both are meet
she scare if leave her seeing her like this
and got shock to see like this
he shouted doctor and nurse while they
inject her and thereting like mental patien
update soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Wonderful update!! ⭐️⭐️ Nisha you just made me cry!!! 😭 It is so heart-wrenching to see Manvi in such a condition! 😒 Finally Virman are together again 😃.. Their hug was so beautiful.. They need each other so much.. Flashback part was so sweet.. She was so full of life.. But at present, she is all broken, scared, helpless.. She didn't even know how to react.. She is not Virat's Manvi anymore.. She is scared, what if Virat too considered her as a mental patient 😔.. I loved her pov a lot 👏👏.. At the end, the only thing matters to her is that her Virat is alive.. Her fear of losing him again is brilliantly portrayed 👍🏼.. Virat is also helpless.. It was so difficult for him to see her in such state.. I hate that doctor and those nurses 😡.. Virat's outburst was natural.. He can't see her in pain.. "No please I don't like it. It hurts." "I'm not crazy Virat. I'm not." - These two lines are just beautiful and painful too.. Awesome Nisha!! 👏👏👏👏 Loved the update ❤️❤️.. Nice song.. I wanted to comment on the blog but don't know how to do it.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Take care 😊

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

hey nisha

wow very emotional and amazing update

i really loved it you really made me cry😭

those flashbacks were so nice

manvi who was so full of life

and now she is all broken everyone threats her like a mental patient🥺

i really hope virat is going to bring her back

and the way she was telling virat that she is not crazy

really good story😊

please continue soon😳

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Hey nisha... sorry gor commenting this late...Just read part ^ and must say that wowww its really an awsm one...You are really a superb and very talented writter...Loved virman reuniuon... the hug and both of theirs condition were really heart wrenching...Feeling really angry over those stupid doctors... hate them..Now there is complication to take manvi home... shit !!Feeling like this mental institute is kind of a one way ride...But virat will somehow take manvi home soon naaa ? ?Really eager to read the next part... cont soon...And dont forget to send your new password to me... I always comment regular.. you know that dear...Really appreciate each of your stories... love them...Pls cont soon ...And I am gonna comment in IF... Hope it isnt a problem right ? and also will like post here.. And will like your facebook page soon... just having a bit problem, hope you will understand... :)

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kalu-devi

@kalu-devi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

It was wonderful nisha I loved part 6 it was mind blowing how u showed the care and proctetivness of virat it was just awesome all the emotions were mind blowing and plz Temne da blog password too

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@.jai.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Awesome update VirMan reunion So much emotional n heart-wrenching update. Feeling really bad for Virat n Manvi 😭.. Pls take her away from the MH.. I cant c Manvi like this n those stupid Nurse n Doctor i wanna kill them 😡. The way u portrayed the emotions n the unconditional love bw VirMan hats off to U 👍🏼.Looking fwd to ur next update.. pls update soon

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meghna325

@meghna325

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Wow! nisha you are just amazing!!!. You claim you are not a writer , but you still you write so beautifully that there are no words to describe . The feelings of both Virat and Manvi are beautifully portrayed, Manvi's insecurities after not finding Virat is so well described ... I think I will go on and on about your natural flair of writing...

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dspandana

@dspandana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Yayyy..virat came bac...waiting for manni to recover...plzz update fast

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jayanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Amazing update. It was so emotional and heart wrenching. I felt very very sad for Manvi. You have enhanced Manvi's present condition by giving a flashback to know how she was behaving earlier. How much extent Virat's false death news has affected her feel like crying. I hate those doctors and that hospital. I wish Virat brings her home soon. Only his love and care is going to make her feel better.

Loved every bit of the update. Pls don't let them suffer more. Continue soon.