VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

I m really sorrt dear...i dont knw how to comment there as i m accecing net frm mob...so i m coomenting here...pls dont mind

updt is super awesome...another emotional n touchy updt...loved the way virat cares manvi...he knws her in n out...thats so beautifull...pure true love...awww...hwww how that doctor dare to treat her like this...n thats nurse not a bit of sensitivity abt some1s pain...i hope wud take her away frm this soon...n their world where there is nobody except them n their unconditional love...superb cont soon...eagerly waiting fr the next

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ragzp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

hey nisha...that was one hell of a soul-stirring update...you have portrayed everything so beautifully- the pain maanvi goes through...her happiness on seeing virat alive...his pain and anger on seeing her like that...wow

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Read the Update right now ..and couldn't hold back my tears 😭😭😭 ... Its painful ..and this is one subject which always leaves me stunned...you have nailed it ...beautifully showing everything ..loved it

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AKSH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

awesome update.. loved it...

virat is back..feeling bad for manvi...

now virat came back he will surely get back that old manvi..

when virat is here not to fear..

looking forward to the next update..

plz update soon...

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Prem Prem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

I love this os.. Maanvi has gone through so much without her partner it was so sad finally Virat is back hope he takes her back home.. Will look forward to the next part

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

another emotional update..it was so heart-wrenching.. can't see virman going through such pain.. but since manvi's remedy for her "grief" is finally here- virat..looking forward to see how will he bring her back..
& ya ur a fab writer..

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Rashina

@Rashina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

awesome update finally they met. Hope they let her go from the hospital. both of their thoughts nice. loved all the part. waiting for next

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

This was so beautifully written.

I read all 6 parts in one go. It was so emotional and touching the way you've written it with the flashbacks and the present situation was amazing.

I really felt for manvi the pain she was going through because she wanted to believe that Virat will come back but everyone else was telling her otherwise. and then Virats pain when he sees how painful it had been for Manvi when he was away.

Loved everything about it.

You are an Amazing writer don't know why I hadn't read this before.

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Such a heart touching and beautiful update Nisha👍🏼 i could feel the pain tat virman were suffering !!! the way u have portrayed the emotions brilliant Nisha👏👏 the way u show manvi fear of loosing virat again gosh mind blowing !!! it really touch my heart !!! n as usual the flashback moment was soo sweet n nice !!! it bring a big smile on my face :D the reunion scene was superb !!! although there were less words the small hug show it all !!! how much they were missing each other n how much they were craving for one another was show soo perfectly !!! such a awesome moment !!! aargh the mental hospital n its doctors 😡 but love the outburst by virat !! the way he care n believe manvi awwn😳😳 loved the whole update to the core ❤️ the song was nice :D looking forward for next update !!! will be eagerly waiting :D

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Viratmanvifan31

@Viratmanvifan31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

beautiful update !!.! manvi's thoughts on seeing virat was amazingly writtn, n doc n virat's part was awesum, lvd virat's outburst. d injectn part superb.

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