VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

awww finallyyy manvi was in his arms...
I was not able to see manvi lyk dat gosh it
was sooo emotional... I hate dat nurses nd doctors...
Nd den d flashbacks scenes were soo cute...
Manvis last email was also emotional i cud actually feel her pain
nd virat was also in pain nd now wen they r together i hope
now cud get sum Happy scenes nd yap i want virat to take full care of manvi..nd manvi to do sumthing big...which will make virat care for her more...nd plzzz update asap..i cant wait

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palsman

@palsman

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

hey dear ur update was awesome

wh said u r not writter u r jst flawless writer

emotions are portrayed brilliantly

injection scence u jst inject it with ur talent

pls pls update soon

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

amazing update

loved it

finally they are together

so emotional

felt sad for maanvi

flashback was nice

plz cont soon

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kinz

@kinz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

update was very touching you are brilliant i seriously had tears in my eyes manvi was really scared that she might be dreaming about him and viraat was expecting her to come running towards him i hope that stupid doc let her go with him

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Sheetal

@serialfreak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Omg I was eagerly waiting for your update. I totally loved it. The scene where Manvi realised Virat is Alive was brilliant. I could feel all the emotions Virat and Manvi were feeling. And I totally loved Virat's protective nature :). Can't wait to read more

Sheetal

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

nisha this update was beautiful

the way u wrote their reunion was perfectly perfect

the anger virat felt seeing manvi in that condition was what i was waiting for and it came out amazingly

indeed she is crazy but crazy for him for his love

hope virat's love make her come out of the fear of losing him again soon❤️

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

ohh god it is so sad to see manvi in this condition,
hope she will be fine soon, hope virat takes her home,
hate this nurse and doc,
want to see happy VIRMAN

great work...

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

This was a great update beautifully written I was eagerly waiting for your update. It was so perfect. Highlight scene was when manvi realizes that virat is alive u conveyed her emotions right on. I almost felt like I was watching something it was honestly truly a great written chapter! Virats protectiveness was the best! Update soon! -zainab

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..Gowri..

@..Gowri..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Nisha, This was mindblowing. The love between these two, deep & pure, expressed so beautifully. 'Love' is not just a four letter word for them, It means life.. So true & so endearing, that one person senses the other's existence even if he's miles away. Sure the mundane life revolves around them, but they live in their own parallel world, the sole reason of their existence, A world where only the two of them will exist forever. There can be no Virat without Manvi & No Manvi without Virat. People around are free to address them as 'mad' but for them, Its a simple acknowledgement of the fact that None of them dies while the other exists. He breathes for her & she for him.. And thats Y they & their love will remain eternal.

Nisha..I loved the way you made both of them 'trust' each other in this FF. She believes he's alive & He belives that she's not crazy. Thats the whole essence of ur FF, U simply have to trust the person u love & nothing else affects u.. Ur writing's simply awesome Nisha.. Do update the next part soon.. :)