VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64 - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
nisha am again asking u am nt able to read the next part plz help
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey,just read the update/...amazing one :)
virat and manvi make a wonderfull couple <3
cont soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Update Nisha👍🏼 It was just so heart wrenching seeing Mannu in such a condition 😭
"No please I don't like it. Please it hurts." Her constant pleas to not hurt her & letting her go to Viraat got me all teary-eyed😭

Loved every bit of it...Hope now they let Viraat take her away so that Mannu cums back to life & become the lively & cheerful girl Viraat left behind 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..it was really heart touching. i can feel the pain virat and manvi are feeling. i am suddenly like 'why did these beautiful people have to go through such a tragedy'
obviously manvi needs time to become normal again, looking forward to see how virat brings her back. Your writing - I always felt that u have this uncanny ability to write about pain and heart-break - so it so immense that I literally feel like hugging them and consoling them :-)


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey it was just awesm. U made me cry. Poor manvi now virat is there all her miseries will be solved.. I luvd both ur stories but not able to comment on the another one sry for that keep writing n entertain us...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was tooo emotional reading manvi's piv just had tears in my eyes i know thts weird bt its all ur fault making the two most lovable people go through sooo much pain wen their fault is just nothing ...
manvi was scared if virat also thinks of her as a mental patient bt then later she was happy stleast he was alive sound and safe and she cud live her entire life there with the thought tht his heart was beating sumwer tht was tooo emotional the way she didnt let him go thinking tht he wud never return or wat if it was just a dream 😭 😭
virat also feeling sooo helpless he is doing it all needed to protect her from the torture shr ws facing till now without any reason...
waiting to see how he gets her bke to normal ...
the emotions the love the care the pain of the two lovers perfectly written and conveyed by you the OS is being beautifully shaped by you...
thanx alott for the blog password update next part sooon
and do let me know
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update..portrayal of emotions is too good..feeling bad 4 both..cnt wait for their happy moments again..cntinue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
yayyy virat and manvi are together again!!! it is hard to see manvi like that :/ :( and that stupid nurse got the right from Virat
i even liked the scene where manvi gets over sensitive and doesn't let him go any where...on the whole brilliant update :) i told you before also but again i say you are a genius writer



(P.S.: i even had tears in between while reading this update)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...just superb...virat and manvis emotions on seeing each other after a long time... u have written very well...while reading it i cud connect with the characters of virat and manvi 😊very easily...also i felt like i was watching it n front of my eyes everythg... 👏
must say u have super dupr talent of writing stories...
hats off to your creativity...thoughts...etc etc...and it goes on
pls do continue soon..u r story very much excited to read further...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is just too sad !!!! 😭
Love how Virat protected Maanvi .. can't wait for him to take her away from there ..
I cant see Maanvi like that ..
It will take time for evrything to be like before ..
Eagerly waiting for next update !!
:)


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