VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww its so damn sad n tragic i was crying on the part where vanshika agreed on sending mannu to a mental institute😭😭
n that part was also heart piercing where they found manvi sleeping in virats closet n hugging his shirt n her e-mails everything is so freaking tragic... ur other stories r so damn hilarious but this its damn sad n tragic
emotions n love which u showed is outstanding which cant be denied👍🏼
plzz pm me n cont soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god !! This was sooo emotional and tragic. Poor manvi. She's in sooo much pain. Had tears in my eyes while reading this. The part where vanshika agreed to send manvi to that mental hospital was just fab !! You have sooo much talent nisha seriously. !! Loved the update. Curious to know what's gonna happen. Please continue soon and do pm me :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
😔 😔 i feel so sad reading Manvi's condition... She loves him too much... Do ppl really luv each other so much? I dont know.. Wen she mentioned abt injections and pills given to hear i was on the verge of crying... Nisha you are doing emotional atyachar on me [:"(] 😛 bt its ok coz you promised a happy ending... Happiness aftr too much sorrow increases the happy feeling 100 tyms i guess 😃 Awww virat's parents are so sweet... They actually are doing everythng possible to help her... Ab plz plz happy happy kar do sab!! Ummm what's w8ing on the door for varun? 😕 acha i was wondering is virat gona be alive and meet Manvi in hospital? 😛 i mean he might hav lost his memory and becum insane and in hospital he sees Manvi and his memory cums back 🤣 i think crap 😆 all the best for ur exams!! Write wen u r free... Take care 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!! they dint just send her there... this was a heart breaking update... cannot see maanvi in this state... wondering what the suspense is going to be..

good luck for all your projects and assignments and exams!!!
update when u have the time and do PM me !! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
all sad updates 😭
when wil manvi get her virat back
want manvi out of this depression soon
update soon
nd do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi im new here awesome os i read all.parts in one go, portrayed manvi feeling so well plz plz pm me next time whenever u update 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
but so sad
you made me cry
poor maanvi felt bad for her
they sent her to mental hospital
plz cont soon
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

HERE ONWARD UPDATES WILL BE PMed.

BOLD ITALICS FOR FLASHBACK.

Part 4

Both Varun and Vanshika walked to the door. "Who was on the phone Varun?" Vanshika questioned.

"I don't know. All they said was to come open the door and the person on the phone asked me to bring you along." Varun answered.

Vanshika's thoughts automatically drifted towards Manvi, "I hope Manvi is fine." Vanshika whispered and Varun nodded understanding her concern as he too was worried for Manvi.

Varun slowly opened the door only to find Viren and few officers outside the door. "Viren? What happened?" He asked urgently.

Viren looked emotional and was struggling to say something. Vanshika immediately grabbed his hand and questioned, "What is wrong Viren? Answer me. I am scared."

Viren moved a step to his right only to reveal him, Virat. Both Vanshika and Varun stared at him for few minutes. They weren't in a position to react. They were told that they had lost their son when his jet crashed in the war field. Was this just an illusion? A cruel game fate was playing with them or was it really him?

"V v Virat?" Vanshika whispered and took a step towards him while Varun stood in the corner not believing his eyes.

The emotions raging within Vanshika couldn't be explained in words. Her only son, her only child who she thought was dead was in front of her.

She wiped her tears and pulled him into a hug. "Virat where were you? Why didn't you tell us that you are alive? We thought you were you were." She struggled to finish her sentence.

"That I was dead." He finished the sentence for her and she shook her head to stop him.

Vanshika kissed his forehead, and pulled him into a hug again. "I missed you so much Virat. You have no idea what it was like without you, how we survived seven months thinking you were gone."

"I'm sorry mom" was the only thing he managed to say.

He looked towards his dad and spoke, "Dad I'm sorry."

Words could not describe what Varun felt at the moment he saw his son standing in front of him. He rushed towards Virat and looked at him from head to toe. He looked different; there were few unhealed wounds on his arm and his neck. "What happened Virat?" Varun questioned.

Virat was not in a state to answer anything so he let Viren do the talking, "Uncle when Virat's jet crashed everyone thought he was dead but he managed to jump off and use his parachute. It saved his life but he was held hostage by the enemies. He was in the hostage camp for over six months before the U.S. Air Force even figured out that one of their pilots is under the arrest of the enemies. It took them a month to negotiate a deal and get him out of there."

"Hostage camp?" Vanshika quickly examined him from head to toe. She couldn't stop thinking about the things her son must have gone through in the last six months. The wounds on his arm, head, neck, clearly spoke of how much the enemies must have tortured him.

"I'm fine mom. I'm home and I don't need anything else." He assured her.

"Mom, dad where is Manvi?" He asked looking around and Viren placed his hand on his shoulder.

"Virat you just got home. Freshen up then we will talk." Viren tried to assure him but that only made him more frustrated.

"What are you talking about Viren? I want to meet my wife first. Only I know how I survived without her these seven months, not knowing if I'd ever be able to come back to her. Every second Viren, she was on my mind every second. If it wasn't for her I would have given up long time back and succumbed to the enemies. I promised her I would come back and I am back, for her. Where is she?" He finally let his emotions out.

"Manvi. Manvi. Baby I'm home like I had promised." He called her and entered the house looking around for her. "Manvi" He called again but there was no answer.

"Mom dad where is she? Is she alright? Answer me." He asked urgently.

Both Vanshika and Varun looked down guiltily and slowly told him everything. They told him about how they were informed about his demise, how she reacted, how much they tried to make her forget him and how her health was worsening day by day.

"I am sorry Virat. I know I promised you I will take care of her but she was not responding to anything. All she did day and night was talk about you, look at your pictures. There were days when she spent majority of the day in your closet hugging your clothes. The doctors warned us too that if her health doesn't get better we might lose her."

Vanshika placed her palm on his cheek to make him understand, "I didn't have any other option Virat. I lost my son I didn't want to lose her too. So we did what the doctor asked us and we sent her."

Virat looked at his mom and questioned, "Sent her where mom?"

"A a a mental institute." Vanshika barely managed to whisper.

He stared at his mom and didn't believe her first. "You sent her to a mental institute? How could you?"

"I am sorry Virat. I didn't have any other option. I was scared; I didn't want to lose her too. You don't know Virat, you don't know. If you see her you will understand. Manvi is not like what she used to be. I don't even remember when she smiled the last time or even ate normal food. We had to inject vitamins in her body every day because she wouldn't eat any solid and if we forced her she would puke it right out which worsened her condition. She doesn't think anymore. Do you know she almost jumped off the terrace twice? She didn't even know where she was walking and if we hadn't seen her walk aimlessly she would have fallen from the terrace. There were nights when we had to call the doctor to sedate her because she wouldn't calm down and she would keep screaming your name. The doctors told us that we were losing her so we did what they asked us to do." She cried bitterly and explained everything to him.

Varun handed him the laptop that Manvi used to send him emails every day and asked him to open his account. He opened his account and saw two hundred and fifty unread emails from her. He opened the last few emails and read how helpless she felt.

He listened to everything Vanshika said, each of her words stabbing him deeper. It was one thing for him to get beaten up and tortured everyday at the hostage camp but he had no idea that Manvi was going through all this. He blamed himself for her condition. He shivered at the thought of losing her. Like Vanshika said, if they hadn't seen her walk aimlessly she would have fallen from the terrace. His Manvi, his wife, his love had to go through so much because of him. Back in the hostage camp he knew she would miss him and cry for him but he had no idea she would suffer so much without him.

"Baby answer me something." He hugged her from behind and held her hands.

"Virat I need to clean the room and go shopping with mom so move." She ordered and tried to push him.

"Please spend some time with me. I miss you." He kissed her neck and moved his hand towards her shoulder.

"I'm right here. I'll be back and then you can spend time with me. Now move."

He left her hand and turned around, "Fine go."

"Virat stop acting like a kid. Okay fine what do you want to ask me?" She prodded but he didn't turn around.

Finally after a lot of convincing he asked, "How many days can you live without me?"

"What kind of a stupid question is that?"

"Answer me." He ordered.

"I don't know a year or two or three or four?" She looked at his annoyed expression and laughed.

"You can live over a year without me when I can't live an hour without you?" He asked clearly offended.

She decided not to tease her husband any longer so she honestly replied, "Virat you are in my head and my heart. I don't know how long but I do know that without you I would lose both my head and my heart."

He hadn't given much thought to what she had said then but now he understood that she meant each word. "I want to go see her now mom."

SONG: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rIs2S2WH7M

Note: Finals in 1 week so no updates for next two weeks. I didn't pm part 3 to anyone so that is why you didn't get a pm.

I will pm this part later too so if you don't get a pm don't go bitching on me 😆

I got shit loads of pm from people asking me to keep them in my pm list. I will update my list after every two updates so if you haven't commented then you will be removed BUT as soon as you comment then you will be put back on. No hard feelings, it is just easier to keep track for me. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR EXAM GIRLS. I'm outta here for 14-20 days.

HERE ONWARD UPDATES WILL BE PMed.

Edited by nisha33 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres!!

Yaay first to comment!!!! :P
Ohhh God!! Virat is back!!!! Aww he was kept hostage for 7 months! And his mom explaining about maanvi's condition over these few months without him was touching. Virat's restlessness to meet maanvi and be with her was really emotional! Ahhh these emotional scenes are just running through my mind right now!! I cant wait to read their meeting after so long! I loved the update all in all!!! The shock, pain, relief, revelations! It had everything!!
Best of luck for ur exams!!!!! 😃
Will wait for ur next update!
Edited by gsrocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Nisha i''m new here i read your story in one go and i loved it very much😊 your a amazing writer👏
wow virat is home just feeling bad for manvi
dying to know how manvi will react on seeing virat😛
can you please add me at your pm list
PS: Good luck for your finals

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