VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update my busy bee... finding out manvi in the closet was the most touching scene yaar... i could imagine her sleeping hugging his shirt nd picture... true love hurts that much, as much it is serene nd make u happy... reading virats emails nd sending him mails was really- (i cant find th appropriate word)... manvi has gone insane... bring virat back pls, or send his wife to him... i am curious about knowing the last part... what is there out th door? i hope virat himself!!!... cont soon nd pm me...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an emotional update ...totally lovd it specially virat's n his mom's convo touchd mah heart ... feeling reali bad fo manvi she is going thru so much.. . i hop virat kums bck soon . . .n make it up fo hr. . . i had tears while dis part ... i cud visulise everythng. . . spectacular update. . . plz add me to ur pm list. . i commentd in part2 also n sent u buddy request... plz accept
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved it
feel bad for manvi
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
EMotional..>~!! u have made emotional allot latey...which is actually hard if u meet me in person...Loved it...it seems so heart felt specially the pain Maanvi is goin through...1 thing that we never give up on is Hope...which she hasn't given up even when she faces the worse...SImply Nice..Waiting for the next N Thnks for the PM Nisha..~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nisha..
again an awesome update..
is virat alive???
its so sad hw much she suffer nd missing him..virats caring for maanvi..he making his mom promise to take care of manvi..its so sweet..
wen dey found maanvi in virats clost with his shirt..dat moment is so ..
i dnt knw wat to say..dat moment is so heart touching..
inspite of others effort she still keep waiting for virat..
hope dat virat will be back..
such a beautiful update..
take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊
Edited by Paruvirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very saddy & emotional update!!!
My heart sank after seeing manvi's present condition!!!!
God...it feels terrible after hearing that she has been regularly injected with drugs!!!
And on top of that...she has been sent to mental asylum 😭

In the last update, you said you will give happy ending!!! I wonder how will you give a happy ending to this sad story!!!!!

And you stopped at a very wrong time...you are killing me with the suspense!!!!!

The flow of the story is going great!!!!
Update soon!!!!
And all the best for your assignments, projects, & exams!!!! 😊

Okay one thing more, i had not got PM of this update!!!! Maybe you forgot by mistake or something!!!!
I had to search from the topics to read the update!!!!
Girl...already i keep waiting for the updates of your stories...& not getting PM of your update...doesn't help!!!
So please don't forget next time...plus i am regular commenter too...so please don't forget next time...it gives me a mini heart attack!!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nisha fabulous update ⭐️⭐️.. Amazingly written 👏👏👏.. Loved the conversation between Virat and his mom.. It showed how much he loved Manvi.. Manvi's condition is getting worse day by day.. They sent her to the mental institute 😔.. I feel really bad for her.. She misses him so much.. She was sleeping in his closet, hugging his shirt 😒.. It was so so emotional 😭.. She again sent him an email.. Nisha that email brought tears to my eyes 😭.. "I have learnt one thing Virat, life without you is not worth living and I'm losing this battle with life. I don't know how long I will be able to hold on anymore." - Loved these lines 👏👏.. Ending is quite interesting.. Really eager to know whats going to happen now.. Beautiful update Nisha ❤️.. The song is just perfect for the update.. Loved it.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Good luck for your exams and assignments 👍🏼.. Take care 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
its completely unbelievable😲...i maen the first part of this os is so light n fun although a little sad but compared to this...n this part is...i kind of guesed it that virat is dead when jeev's said to manvi that he;s not coming back not today not tomorrow😭...but i kind of like manvi not believing it n i completely believed it when virat's father said that i will never forgive him...at this point i completely thought that he betrayed her...but the truth is something else...n u showed manvi's condition really well not only manvi but any wife's condition would not be less than this whose husband is been dead...n as u say that it will be a happy ending now really looking forward to it how u will make this really sad; depressed n tragic😔 story a happily ever after😛 n thanks for the pm n also sorry for commenting late😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear i wanna say that i always read ur update.. i will b not there 4 sumtime but i will read n comment after cuming back.. so plz plz plz plz i beg u plz pm me ur every update... i promise will give u longer comment afterwards.. plz mjhe pm karna mat bhulna me jb b aae zarur long comment dungi..

Thank u

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