Heart's A Mess T#2 TSR PG 144 27/10

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

I am still n0t crying!! Y0u kn0w y0u still give me h0pe with th0se littld things y0u write. Like the heart rate increasing and he kn0ws its Khushi. She will leave him? I d0nt believe it.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

stalking pays offf.
however i am srry i wont read this chapter until you post chapter 17 because you said 16 will be more sad. i will read on update of 17th both the parts and will comment on the blog.
srry but dnt have the guts to read it while waiting for the next.

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Hey!

Hope you are doing well ... 😊

Another well-written update.

Emotional. This was to be expected though.

The situation that Arnav and Khushi are in ... one cannot say that "Oh if I were him/her, I'd do this ..." because in a situation like that ... you wouldn't know what to do unless you'd be in those circumstances generally.

I felt teary whilst reading this ... Truely. 😭😭😭

I look forward to reading the next update of this story and YLME 😛

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Sharna aka Salena

@xMidnightStarx

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Just read Chapter 15 and 16!

I honestly cried while reading them.

The song choices for the updates were perfect.

The emotions were written beautifully.

Khushi's POV was fantastic.

Arnav's trauma was emotional.

Just everything was like a movie!

Waiting eagerly for Chapter 17!!

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

TRI ...BEAUTIFUL

LOVED HOW YOU PORTRAY THE FEELING THE EMOTIONS

THE PAIN THE HURT

LOVED EVERYTHING

MAKE THINGS OK ...OKAY

THANKS FOR THE PM

ALERT ME

KKKA

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Very nice update!!!
Can wait to read the next.

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

the song was beautiful just like the update ..you are a master in capturing the emotions of arhi ...their silence spoke volumes ..even though it was short it left an impact on me ..waiting for the next part