Heart's A Mess T#2 TSR PG 144 27/10

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

oh god! completely agree that you achieved the desired effect.

this was devastating.

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

OH NO OH NO! Way to break my heart Sasak!

While I think that the length was perfectly alright and effective in terms of emotional impact-- my dil hurts! :'(

And you say that the next one will be worse!

I can't. I cry every single time. WHHYYY?

I just... I don't even... I can't even come up with a coherent comment damnit!

The emotional impact of this story is just that much!

I just want Khushi and Arnav to not hurt so much. And I hate the asli duniya for doing this to them.

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

This was just painful...There is no other way to describe it... and the music though perfect just made me cry even more...
update soon please

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

awesome update she can't never see him again nooo

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Ouch, that last line actually gives you a lump in your throat. I await to see what you have planned further :)

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

You were absolutely write about the short update, that moment has to be isolated for the required impact and it did made a powerful impact. The way you wrote Khushi's observation in the room and her reaction looking at Arnav was so heart wrenching. Hope they find happiness in their remaining life together. Brilliant chapter, exceptionally well written!