SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19) - Page 42

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Nice update farha! I love this method of silencing KKG 😉 ..'. Faraq parta hai ... ' sigh ... I love your DM .. A real romantic ;)

Lovely writing sweetz... Now update D4D😉😆

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was an amazing and brilliant update, loved the whole update and from start to finish it was a fantastic read.

Loved the confrontation between Arnav and Khushi in the Mandir, Khushi knew how to get Arnav's temper out and he was getting so impatient.

Loved the way he picked Khushi up and bought her from the Mandir as he wanted to speak to khushi alone.

Wow loved the kiss, it was amazing so sensual, intimate and passionate and you had written it so beautifully and bless Arnav he had to kiss her as it was the only way to make khushi stop talking.

I loved the dialogue you used, "Ab sunogi" it reminded me of the store room scene when Arnav broke the door in the serial.

Loved all the "Aapko Kya farak paradhta hai" dialogues and Arnav finally answered the question at the end, loved the revelation from Arnav that he only dated Lavanya because of Khushi, hopefully to make her jealous.

Loved the whole update, it was written perfectly and exceptionally well.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

Originally posted by: chandana.s

Wow...That was fabulous part..Loved it

Loved how he handled the situation smartly

Awww,He kissed her !! 😳

Arnav knows y Khushi is upset & he want her to admit it that its matters to her if he is with some other person & Khushi is no less,She also want him to tel her y its matters to her if she mistook him & then he finally admitted y he dated Lav..

Lovely part with wonderful dialogues ...Enjoyed reading

Cant wait to read more

Cant wait to see where will this gona take them

Update soon

P.S-Sorry as I couldn't able to comment on the last 2-3 updates of ur stories as I was busy with exams..

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

he kissed her and thn ask her "ab sunogi" wht do he expect in reply beside yes?
obv sune ge he na jani bandi to app ke ghulam hai (eye rolling)
ooohh tht was a revelation, i certainly never expected k baat is had tak barhe howe hai mr.raizada ke taraf say kay he asked lavanya out because of khushi.
where on one end it is flattering on the other hand its very twisted!!!!!!!!!!!

@farah: next update please before the end of next month pleaseee

Originally posted by: deeswarna

that was some revelation! oh my he asked lavanya out because of khushi! its totally unexpected and im a bit confused with this!

lol arnav is always stucking on the same kyoun farak padta! he should have said it! lol

loved the bold khushi who wanted answers and was bound on getting them from arnav!

n their kiss was just perfect!

mind blowing update, totally worth the wait!

Originally posted by: ihtruda

thank you so soos so much di.. sorry couldnt comment on the previous two updates. I did read them... but this is just mind blowing... awww... the super super kiss... i kinda read the part twice... am trying hard to control my blush when i read the update in the office in my cell phone.. 😳😳 awesome di... Please dont make us to wait long for the next update. It is a humble request😊

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-

This update really dedicated to epic "Farak"

really enjoy while reading

its simply "farak" update

so many emotion and above that fight over with their own emotions

i really feel how hard for ASR to control his anger when khushi never make things easy for him :)

there's only KKG who say anything On face of Arnav Singh Raizada

Here ASR meet his own match KKG

well we all know it from many updates

they kiss and to shut her arnav kiss...sealing to want to completeness the beautiful journey of their first kiss :)

i happy khushi doesn't reveal his emotions and hurt she needs to be strong and deal with that ASR in her own way

ap ko isse kya faraq padta hai?"

"Faraq padta hain, dammit!"

"Kyun? Kyun faraq padta hai?"

"Faraq padta hain Kyun ki .. I '. I '... "

and there Arnav first time ever lost words to speak

damn of he speak thing get easy for them but no if he speak how arnav khushi love story moves

atleast he admitted he broke upp with Lavanya because of her or say for her

can i request you

please jaldi jaldi update dia karo

Originally posted by: mistyrains

I have no idea why I did not stumble upon this story earlier, but I am so glad I did. The title attracted me initially. It was catchy, fresh. And so is the story, refreshing, so breezy. I love this silent passion, those tremors of first love brewing in this story. Its fantastic, really <3 Please PM me if you can :)

Originally posted by: shree10

Farah.. 1 toh aap haumko tadpa tadpa kar update karte ho and then aise bum phod dete ho sir pe woh bhi end mein!

About the end- "What the !!" He asked Lavs out bcos of Khushi? Was it to run away from his own feelings towards Khushi ?

Pl pl update fast. Cant wait to read next.