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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reallyhappy

fark padta h.. qki baat 'tumhaari' h isliye fark padta h,, kisi aur ki hoti toh nai padta,,!! haye re..! wt a btfl updte..:) ... n congrts..:)

@bold & blue: I so wish Arnav said these to Khushi in the show! But now! Khush tells him .. arghh!
I promise Arnav will finish this sentence in this story .. perhaps I will borrow your version! 😉
Thanks & Love .. as always! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iritz

"I asked Lavanya out because of you, Dammit !!!"

Are we heading to a full fledged confession... as usual, awesome update... and you save the best for last... your last dialogs keep readers asking for more !!!

I am a bit fussy about the closing .. lol. Do you want this story to end in the next chapter? 😛 If yes, then I will give a confession! LOL .. my story ends with the confession. Nothing beyond that. 😊
We have already had this discussion .. and of course, you will know before many when it comes. 😉
Love! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raila1014

He cared enough o o clear the air but has to answer to the "kyun Farak padta hain? Question. Good girl for not giving in - he needs to realize why she matters so much to him. He shut her up the only way he knew - at least he is quicker than ASR on the show - no miss kiss here. Please continue soon.

Haha! Yeah! My Arnav is smarter! 😉 He has learnt his lesson well from the first miss. 😆
Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: praj.shrish

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That was so soothing update...No other word suits here to describe about this update. It's like a cool zephyr at hot summer evening announcing arrival of blissful rain...exciting, overwhelming...just Soothing...⭐️

Like how Khushi did not waft away with her inner turmoil or pricking emotions...she hold her fort strongly till Arnav declared 'farak Padata Hai'...Lovted it.

Arnav true to his nature tried to make her play on his own tunes..but if he is Arnav Singh Raizada then she is Khushi Kumari Gupta...an equally competent apponenet ...he has to let his attitude washed out ...after all 'Ye Dil kisi ki sunata ha bhala'..Ohhh..what a way to make her shut up...I enetered my dreamland...

Over all it was very heartwhelming, cute , romantic update...Plz update soon...

Kyoki Hume Farak Padata Hai Damn it!!!!!!!!!!!😛

Such a beautifully written comment! And I am now tempted to start reading your FF the first chance I get. 😳
You nicely put in words the essence of the chapter. There is a reason why these two are meant to be together .. because only one can break the other.
Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

I am a bit fussy about the closing .. lol. Do you want this story to end in the next chapter? 😛 If yes, then I will give a confession! LOL .. my story ends with the confession. Nothing beyond that. 😊
We have already had this discussion .. and of course, you will know before many when it comes. 😉
Love! 🤗


@black...oh no 😭 nothing beyond confession...no marriage...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Ah finally I have a good doze of my absolute favourite story till date! This chapter was so intense, gripping and so full of emotions! I couldn't help but feel, feel the frustration and internal thoughts of both sides. Visualize every single expression, the way you express feelings is out of this world. It is like a very gradual and real process. My favourite character DM made an appearance again "Just Say it Dammit"...I was so with her there. Brilliant portrayal of Khushi's thought process here she acted so maturely when she told him about a woman's heart being very fragile and it hurts more than he can see. This gave him an indication of her heartbreak too! Can I just say I love the fact that u always focus on these two and write all the conversations so beautifully that make us all imagine ourselves somewhere there in the background witnessing the whole scene!


Fantastic work please continue soon!👏

Your comment made me all .. *blush, blush* and also *happy, happy* 😳😊
I am really happy that you noted that line .. about a woman's fragile heart. 😊 That's exactly why I put it there. And sometimes I feel, I perhaps write a bit too much in detail .. I am a bit more visual than many writers in this FF. But when you and many others say that help you feel the story better, I feel better. 😊
Thanks for reading! And always leaving your encouraging word. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh ... Is he going to break her heart again ????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjs


@black...oh no 😭 nothing beyond confession...no marriage...😭

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Dont cry baba! I will write an epilogue if you want. But I dont want you guys to feel this story is dragged. But .. wait? Why are you talking about epilogue now? Tongue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vqwerty

What an Update it was Farha di 👏👏
And abt the kiss...I really dunno what to say...Am still in a trance after reading it🤪☺️
"Ab sunogi"...was Superb😆😆Obviously khushi wil nt be able to speak after that mind blowing kiss😳😆
"Farak padta hai"...One of the fav tracks for everyone...😃 was very happy to read again Arnav saying,Farak padta hai dammit😉
Awsome,Awesome update...Loved reading their fight😉

Viji!! 🤗
Thank Dips for the kiss! I wrote much less but she thought I should write more. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjs

lovely update...but he said everything but not that what mattered...


it will create more complications in the future naa... khushi's family has already found a groom for her and m sure payal asked her to come home early for that... maybe the groom has come for the shagun ceremony or something like that...

hope atleast now Arnav accepts how important Khushi is and keep her with him forever

Whoa! 😲
You really follow my story quite well darling! I really have to appreciate you for that. 😊👏
Thanks for being there always! 🤗
Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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