SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: Prasanna_dhanu
Amazing chapter, wonderful update.

Indeed truth is liberating, and how fiesty can Khushi get , awesome.. thanks for the PM and loved the whole update

Unlike CVs, I am trying to stick to Khushi's character basics! CVs hardly gave us any glimpse of her thought process and left us confused about her most of the times.

Let's see if my Khushi can straighten Arnav Singh Raizada without having him kidnapped! 😉😆

Thanks for always encouraging me from the very beginning! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: riti4u
beautiful update farha... loved the way you described Arnav's eyes when he removes aviator..the look and how khushi sensed it too...loved hw Arnav stopped khushi frm talkin and made her listen😆..there cant be a better way...but Arnav ji..is famous for his incomplete sentences...and thus bang on with that on...faraq padta hain kyunki,.. like devi maiyya- I will say it too- Say it Dammit!😆 Looking forward to khushi's reaction on arnav's revelation here...😃 Take Care😳

We simply love that scene dont, we? When Arnav removes his aviator? 😆 This is exactly what I had in mind when I was writing that scene!

He will finish his sentence! I shapath! 😆

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: .sakshi.

Oh God! This was a rocking update!! It was soo beautifully written. It was just Fantabulous! [Fantastic + Fabulous ;) ]

When Arnav took her in his arms..I was like wowww!!

And then their talk in a secluded place..! Loved the way Khushi made Arnav confess.!

Btw Mr. Raizada sounds sexy!

And I love this way of shutting up people.! Now This was a kiss!! I was totally into that kiss while reading it..it was just awesome!! and my heart was doing Dhinka Chika all the while!

And then Farak padta hai!!

"I asked Lavanya out because of you, dammit"

^^ Hope Arnav will elaborate it.

PS- Devi maiya, I love you!

PPS-Thanks for the awesome update!

Sakshi!! 🤗

Can you get anymore sweeter? 😳 And I simply love your dp .. it is such a mood lifter. 😊

Mr. Raizada sound sexy? 😲 Darling, he is a complete package of sexiness! 😉😆 He walks sexy, talks sexy, smirks sexy, eats sexy, sleep sexy, yawns sexy, winks sexy ... I better stop now. Quite an inspiration! 😉

Thank you for the lovely words you always leave behind for me. It is really a pleasure knowing you. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Nehasupnfan
This story is such a delight! Just caught it and wanted to say its amazing!! Btw, are you a bong by any chance?

We have already talked. Yet again .. welcome on board! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: ranjuranjitha
finally the truth is out!!! Now khushi knows why arnav was dating lavanya and its confirmed that he indeed has some strong feelings for khushi.. Loved it!!

@bold & blue: Bingo! 👏

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: lakraj80
OMG farah, it was mind blowing! The kiss was superb! I could visualise the way arnav asked ab sunogi!! Eek dam paisa vasool! Loved it to bits. But another cliff hanger, not fair, hopefully won't have to wait long! Thanks for the pm and pls update soon.

@bold & blue: Where is the money? Show me the money! 🤣🤣

On a serious note, just wanted to thank you for being with my stories always .. not matter whatever crap I have written. 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: cheesemad
omg dey kissed...i loved it...omg m so happy 😳
coming back to d update...loved 1st farak padta hai...poor khushi..she's heart broken..😭

arnav asked lavanya out bcoz of khushi...

n i also luved dat ab sunogi...arnav saying it wid all style n passion...wow...

hey why did u stop d update at dis point??😭

u wrote dis update exceptionally well...👏

continue soon...would luv 2 read more...

thnx fr d pm...

Thank you so much, dear. I had a tough time writing this update and it is worth it when you guys think it was good. 😊

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: Micha1005
I am really liking ur story..even though the space is very slow..or I feel so cause the gap between upates is so big :)

I have to agree with you about the pace of the story. 😊 Also I am late with updates. So I am thinking of speeding it up a bit .. Let's see! 😊 Dont want readers to fall asleep! 😆

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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Izza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Heyy please update sooonnn :)

Waitingg :)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: Dynamix215
*starts with a small smile which turns to a smirk and then to grin and a full blown howling laugh*
I enjoyed th last bit to the very core!

=)

Update soon!

😆

Howling laugh? Haha .. you too love a tortured Arnav, don't you? 🤣 I cant wait to see his tortured soul in your FF. 😉

Loved your reaction!

Thanks for reading! 🤗