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Nikki

@Chocolate...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

this updt was just beautiful, i'm speechless...

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

The kissing scene was Awesome.

The individual thoughts just before the kiss were very beautifully described.

.. And I just loved the intricate description of the weather.
The greyish white rain forming a curtain was great.

Arnav's insecurities and the subsequent defense mechanism is justified.

Contrary to what Arnav chooses to think, I would say that he is the luckiest guy to have gotten rid of a certain bitch.

Arnav's words were very harsh.

But I was amazed at Khushi's confession.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

that sheetal man
she is the one who is still making her presence and words linger in him
how could she do this to him
and all because of her now arnie is behaving this way
oh arnie what to we do with ya
though you aint wrong in your place either dude
after all what she said has left a deep impact on you
and you dont want to give in to this feeling you have for khushi
but you will do in the end
why because this is khushi not sheetal
wow that was one hell of a kiss
and yet its the kiss that has made problems between them
why did this have to happen
hope her confession of love might help
wow she was so worried about him she came to check on him
so lets see whats next

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

aww...that wass happy and sad both...i dont know whether to be happy that they kissed or to be sad looking at the aftermath...

the kiss was beautiful...it was lively...and under the rain it was perfecct...

i really felt for khushi...she was happy and was waiting for him and he never turns up...

his insecurities really scary...poor thing, i hope he lets khushi heal him cos im sure this tea girl with the name happiness would definetly do that...

will her confession undo him...

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Ab Jab Jenny, Meera aise badi hastiyone bol diya toh hum kya bole?

Kiss was beautiful, Anu! I could actually visualize whole atmosphere and Arshi too.
So now Arnav will punish himself and Khushi for momentary lapse of his guards going down.

I hope he soon realizes that Khushi is nothing like Sheetal and she has feelings for him irrespective of his perceived faults with himself. Now he just needs to take a leap of faith and give them both a chance at happiness.

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

This SS is so cute! I think it highlights how judgemental people can be but I love how you're showing that not all people are like that! The setting of Darjeeling is just amazing! It's somewhere I have always wanted to visit (got a thing for tea LOL) and I can imagine the conversations between Arnav and Khushi being played out surrounded by the greenery. I hope that Arnav does realise that Khushi does really love him and doesn't judge him by his physical appearance. A very cute and meaningful SS 😊

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Pls pm me wen u
will catch up after exams
pls reply by scrapping

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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

i loved it ... loved the kisss !!!! and everything about the update ... :D

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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

i loved it ... loved the kisss !!!! and everything about the update ... :D sachhi muchhhi !!!!!! maza aa gya ... i love you sun k toh !!! sheetal was a bitch ... what would be arnav's reaction to this confession ?? :o