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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

Happy Budday!!! Hope you have a great day and a great year ahead. Muah

And this was such a rainy day, hot cup of tea and hot pakoras kind of update. Are you going to be writing more? You should :)

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crazy dude! ;)

@Rimo22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

---UnRes---

I am second and that too on your first page of SS! Oh! i m dancing with joy!yaaayyy!!

Kay.Paradon me for getting lost somewhere without editing this post. I just forgot to UnRes!

But now i m here, commenting after reading the first three parts!😛😉

So, Am i forgiven? Okay, Thankyou so much! 😆😃

Now, Can i come about to story?! Yeah? Okay,😉

---about story---

Its amazing! Simply Awesome!👏
I agree with you on the point that physical beauty isn't everything actually it is nothing after knowing a person!
I love the concept to the core.❤️

Both the introductions are awesome!😃

Poor Khushi had to face her aunt's tantrums, ba thankGod she left them now that she can live in peace and that with Arnav soon!😳

In third chapter i think of Lavanya as his wifey first but then i know you can't do this to our Arshi! 😈

Oh! this story is full of knowledge on TEA, isn't it? but i love this! ⭐️

oh and that sentence, ''Your eyes resembles Darjeeling oolong tea'' it made me laugh like a retard though i don't know anything about oolong tea!🤣

Okay Leechi and Cheeku! A wow love story!☺️

Please update soon, i have to comment on many more but i m in a lil rush! 😕 so i'll edit it again soon! waiting for update! 😃

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

res! 😊

Ati hu thode der mai.
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Edied: Firstly, a very happy budday 🤗And many, many happy returns of the day!

And I truly, truly, just loved this shot! Why can't it be longer than a TS? Why? I tell you...it has potential to be a rather long FF.
Wonderfully written.
And d'you know that tea is my favourite kind of drink? I don't know, there's a calmness and satisfaction in the taste with binds people. And I know for a fact that it binds A and K 😉
Oh, there's a childhood connection, right? Really, cannot wait to read more of the bada afsar, and how the lovely tea-maker gets herself noticed. After all..she does make the best tea in the whole town!

Update soon! :-)

And now I shall go and make myself a hot cup of tea.

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

many more happy returns of the day...have a great day ahead...

n loved the update...waiting fot the next part...

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved d start
pls do continue soon

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

Happy Birthday dear 🥳

Resing will come back soonish... 😊

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I loved the vivid imagery your created.

I could so sense the cold and feel the green and see the local women with the children.

I loved it that Khushi has made a life for herself beyond the suffocating confines of her aunt's house.

And seems her fate has taken her to the land of a certain unappreciative Raizada... 😉

I am looking forward to read more 😊

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

So lovely- your writing is so vivid, I could see all of it happening before my eyes. The tea-pickers, the cold wind biting your skin, the determination of a strong willed woman. Wow. And the smell of Darjeeling tea. Please post the next part soon. Arnav tayyar ho na ho, hum to tayyar hain :)
P.S. Happy birthday, just read the earlier comments It was my sister's as well :) many happy returns of the day!

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

I just caught up on this OS. Many happy returns of the day - though it is little belated. Nice start. Can you please pm me when you update. Thanks.

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

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1. Wish you a very very Happy birthday. Have loads of fun :)

2. Loved the title (Skimmed through the write up, so know how apt it is)!

3. Shall come back with 'My thoughts' in a while after reading properly (RES)

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First thing that came to mind while reading the first chapter was 'Mistress of Spices' . I dunno how relevant it is to your story, but just thought of letting you know.

So the bada afsar does not praise Khushi's tea? HOW DARE HE? But I m guessing soon he will. Maybe he'll take her home to mke tea exclusively for him, for all his life :D

Loved the Darjeeling description. Never been there, so it was quite a vivid narrative for the likes of me. Very fascinating.

Off to read Chapter 2 now!!!

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago