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PoochiePie

@PoochiePie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Loved the update! 😃

But what is going on in Arnav's mind...Why didn't he tell Khushi that he remembers who she is...😕

And Arnav has a girlfriend..Oh no! 😔

Waiting for the story to unfold...😊

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shreesharamesh

@shreesharamesh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

hi Dear,

how can one forget u after reading MIRAGE wow tat was awesome u know even now i will read it when ever i feel bored ..

now lemme come back to this,,

hmmm wat to say ... its awesome the way u narrate the story and revel the secrets in it hmmm no words to describe it i can just wait for ur updates daily tats it

THANKU SOOO MUCH FOR PM😃

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Wow...i liked that! So ahe was his childhod freind but something happened and he couldnt save her so he thinks he's not worthy of her freindship...
Great update!

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Hi...

I am glad that you decided to come back with a story... I read Mirage after you've completed it...i.e, during the period you were inactive on IF... I loved that story very much.

Read the two chapters just now and I am already looking forward for this.
Liked this environment you gave with the story...
Eagerly waiting for the next update...

Sruthi...

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

I am a silent reader who has really enjoyed all your written work. You are a brilliant writer and I thought you have left the forum and I am sooo happy that you have started this FF. Just wanted to let you know.
Great start of another amazing story, I can't wait to read more. You have asked a Q that do we remember 'Mirage' now what kind of question is that ? can we ever forget that FF that is a masterpiece one of the kind, unforgettable.
So what have we got here almost British Raizada who is called 'chote Saab' and he already have a girlfriend but he is not in love with her. Khushi comes from a poor family compared to his almost royal family. Arnav is pretending not to remember her...interesting, can't wait for all to unfold slowly.
Will be waiting for the next chapter eagerly.
Thank you for starting yet another lovely story.

Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

I have read Mirage and loved it. Didn't know you had started another story. Just read both the chapters. Loved the stoy set in the backdrop of Mussourie. Waiting for the 12th to read more.

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

I loved mirage and your os specially about nine month old Arush...I am really excited to read another story ...it seems very interesting...😊

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

did he hallucinate the girl calling "Annyav " in last part

arnie is in relation with lavanya.....wht abt khushi...

anji -arnie convo...gud

arnie dad-arnie convo--lukd like army senior -junior convo🤪

nainaji- arthurji emotional convo regarding arnie made me feel sad

arthurji..as a father says tey will get thr old arnie back😕

as a business and army man says no ...(lets see...khushi may bring arnie back 😉)

arshi meet...finally 😳

khushi recognised arnie...her "Chotey sahab"😛

y arnie lied her he didnt knw her😲 something fishy 😛

khushi sad hearing that... hmm

something made arnie think abt pain...whts the mystery 😲

wow...u started with ur mystery...

cant guess ur ff upcoming at all 😕

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waiting for next update

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ankitachoudhury
reswaaa😳😳😳

anki u got first place 😲

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Beautiful Update :D

When u said Arnav,Khushi shares dark past I thought its their families involved.Right now also its not very clear,but looks like it was only these two involved.

Arnav's indifferent behaviour must have hurt her badly.But why is he doing it?there must be something solid behind it.

Eagerly,waiting for next update.:D