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Vaiga

@Aashmin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

Dear i very well remember u n ur mirage...how can we forget u???even u told something like ur family is having some underworld background ryt:-)...mirage was such an amazing story n i stil adore that gangster arnav n khushi..i just found dis new 1,n read in one go...loved it...will be in for the entire ride...

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

Rachel,

This is another beautiful and exquisitve piece of literature by you. You are a marvelous writer. One that always spellbind your readers with your every word. I am loving this FF as much as Mirage. The plot is intriguing and the characters are phenomenal. It's endearing to know that Khushi waited 15 years for her best friend to come back to her and finally her prayers are anwsered. It was heartbreaking to see Arnav avoid her for the first couple of days but no one can resist her charm and innocence for too long. I'm loving the childhood flashbacks of Arshi.

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

Hey,

Congrats for an awesome beginning😊👏! THOSE BEAUTIFUL CHILDHOOD MEMORIES, SPECIALLY THOSE WHICH REMINDED HIM OF HIS CUTE COMPANION- you have hit one of the longest sixes of the current IPL 👏👏 U are a genuinely sweet person and a wonderfully gifted writer... the concluding line of Chapter1 and that "Annyav..." was so touching😳😳 a fully grown guy like me felt the heart strings being tugged in oh so a subtle manner..my heart melted at A's reminiscences of fifteen years backAn excellent start..though a touch late to remark thus..Thanx

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

I don't know why I found this so late. But it has been bookmarked and will be read first thing after my exams.

By the way, read the first chapter, it's brilliant. Really. Have. To. Stop. Myself. From. Reading. It. Now.

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tunai

@tunai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

mirage was a fairytale...and this ff is no less...all i can say is your're an amazing story writer..:)

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

just started reading it :)
and im v much liking it

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@.Boss.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1067

Wow! Just read first couple of chapters, n m hooked! Gonna read this! Loved your story mirage as well, must say this is a masterpiece too! Reading in progress!!

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1068

Hi ML, Mirage was one of its kind, that I read first and loved the story line and your writing. So you can trust be reading this for sure. I so loved your writing style, and looking fwd to read this. thanks for coming back with another one.