ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed*

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sushna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Wow nice loved it vry funny reasons to brk up
updte soon :-)

Edited by sushna - 12 years ago

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

i was just going to re-read the story and guess wat ???.. there was an update and I had no pm!!😭😭😭

wid a sad face and pondering y no pm i started reading...

omg! i was laughing so much while reading dat i had tears rolling down my face!😆 ...

plan?...burnt/bad pokora???rolf ...seriously,whoever broke up abt a burnt pakora??!!🤣🤣 ...trust akash to come up wid dat!..& Arnav actually agreed to go thru wid it? 😆

wat transpires: Arnav telling Khushi she cant even make a bad pakora so dat they cud break up!..n how to break up wid such delicious pakora... ha ha ha ha ..

khushi-difficult to make bad food..nid patience n time...😆 ...(dats easy for me😃

then: both blaming each other dat d other one wants to break up..

reasons: one is not beautiful enough while d other one is heartless and ruthless ...of course before they retract their words praising each other 😃

end: khushi says she wants to break up cz Arnav hasnt said I ❤️ U!!🤣 ...OMG!these guys are too much! my jaws are aching due to laughing too much!

This is freaking hilarious! oh! great update!👏 thoroughly enjoyed it!

m so luking forward to d next update!... haven't laughed so much wen reading in awhile ...

ps: dis update made up for not receiving d Pm.

Edited by khushiiXOXO - 12 years ago

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

This chapter was so so funny, I can imagine this whole scene happening right in front of my eyes.

Such is your writing style Saiyu,

Waiting for the next chapter.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

How the hell did I miss this thread completely!

I suck at stalking clearly. Off to read the chapters I've missed. Please expect a comment soon-ish :)

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Oh goodness woman you will be the death of me!!

Falling catching, what the, jalebis and pakoras, kya bolun ab and exaggerated Khushi-style winking - I absolutely LOVE this story.

And I love how I can't stop laughing at the humor in your writing and smiling at the nostalgia that you are able to evoke so easily.

I think writing light hearted, fun stories is a talent very few people have and you my dear Rasgulla_SP have that in abundance!

Cheers and Hugs to you!

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Akash until you reveal about your "business trip" this picture is you.

If you cant see Akash's face in this picture you are a big fat liar.

Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

i loved it saiyoo

the chap was awesome

waiting everyday for the update

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smarty94

@smarty94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

res.

*EDIT*

that was some update, a mixture of one of the most funny, most rocking dialogues😆

the"Kya bolun ab" brought back the scene of Akash pretending to suicide and Payal running to save him, and Khushi asking ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA to ACT!!! O.O ASR ki acting skills sirf pooray dramay mein do baar dekhnay ko mileen theen, once during this suicide drama and the other when they are fooling Anjali and give her the abortion pills for Shyam🤣🤣 that scene gave me fittsss🤣🤣

and then our lioness' dialogue, "bhar mein gaye aap, aur bar mein gayee apki naukri" hayeee that was the only scene which made me watch this drama, aaj se pehle shayd hi koi aisa scene dekha hoga mainne tv pe

and thennn the ending😆 yaar aap ne dhamakay karne ki qasam toh kha rakhi hai, hansa hansa ke maarna ka irada bhi hai kya🤣🤣🤣

take care and update soOn😊

oh and i updated my last comment on pg 11😳

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago