ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed*

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

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sj_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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To say that I am touched by the dedication and the lovely words you wrote would be an understatement. The fact that they are from a friend and author whose work I enjoy reading makes it all the more special. I am truly glad that we met on IF Saiyu.

Coming to the story, I read all your chapters in one go and thoroughly enjoyed them. The whole concept, arranging of updates, remembrances of the various facets and relations we treasured in the show is admirable. I have maintained ever since your 'Unnamed' (and your readers would agree with me here) that you do have a knack at writing satire and light hearted stories. I could not be happier that you started one.

I love your Aakash. He is everything I wanted him to be; a bit of mischief as a younger sibling, unparalleled pleasure he gets at his Bhai's expense, the sensible soul and of course 'screen space'. Anjali's day begins and ends with the topic of marriage. Since the epicentre of her life is chotte, he has aptly become the goat out here. Arnav and Khushi are entertaining, they hardly realise when to switch on and switch off behaving as a couple. The former is showing all signs of being interested right from the time he first saw her. Guess it would take a lot more than the current set-up to make him agree to that. I love the story Saiyu and all your characters. Teej brought back wonderful memories to me.

PS: You happen to be the first one to address me as sv

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asrcraze

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Posted: 12 years ago

La :)

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I got tired of using collages prepared by others and made this for your latest update...

There are many times Arnav has carried Khushi in his arms and I hope the collage does justice to some of them at least.

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

Twiggy!

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So much in this update, including a classic ArShi fall-n-catch and a Rabba Very moment and so much fun and the funniest Aakash. Yet, I cannot write about anything because I am busy laughing at one this only -

Constipation! Severe Constipation! Hahahaha 🤣 Only you could have come up with that! 🤣🤣

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 12 years ago

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first toh congrats on new thread!

Now cuming to update...u make me remember so many memories of arshi lifts...right from the first epi till that scene in which arnav carries khushi to bed and then turn off the lights n then came closer to her n say "ab theek hai"(during mrs.india track..i think thats the last lift) aur fir screen blurr ho gai and next day..as usual.!

I think one and half year me arnav ne khushi ko hazaar se b zaada baar uthaya hoga.! Muscular BARUN..! Koi kaam nai hai chalo khushi ko utthao,..poolside se lekar bed tak b khushi ko utha k hi lekar jata tha..kabi kabi..!
Kabi gusse me, kabi pyar se, kabi fikar se, kabi irritate hokar, kabi surprise karke,, kabi zabardasti, kabi aankhen band karke(khushi ki), bas khushi arnav ki arms mein perfectly fit ho jati thi.!
Itni baar toh barun ne pashmeen ko b nai uthaya hoga..lol 😃

Wapis update pe,..lol arnav khushi ko utha kar hi gharwalon ko bula ra tha...typical ASR.! Lol

break up wid u..!!! Excuse me..! She is not ur girlfriend dude! How can u break up wid her.?

I wish muje b koi ASR hi mile jo muje har tym utha k hi rakhe..!
*sigh* 😊

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nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

Because he is not marreid to her

Premature death

Khushi bhabi

ab aur kya baaki hai!

and now the break up.

waiting for Akash's reaction

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

congo on new thread... and that was one lovely update...but what is the sudden break up arnav is insisting on...keeping my fingers crossed...excuse my short comments...my pc has crashed and i am coming via mobile...and my mob is getting on my nerves with its snail paced loading of pages...somebody kill me...arghhh

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congrats on a new thread!! Man this story is a complete comedy of errors! Arnav and khushi just keep sinking under the fibs they are saying!!

Ps. Loved the part you said that would pick you up at the drop of a hat!! Kash aisa koi hota!!!