ArHi SS: An Apate Affair#2, *Completed* - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Everyday I tell myself that I will stop my obsession with IF. everyday I tell myself that I will at least stop reading new stuff and just stick with waiting for updates on the FFs that I already read, but then very often, in moments of weakness, I go searching for new stories. And so it happened that I read your Fairy Tale.
I found it 2 days ago, and was tempted to read only because it said "completed". I promised myself I would not go to your index. And I didn't. for a whole 2 hrs after completing the Fairy Tale.

First let me tell you, that Fairy tale was the best I have ever read...It had all the elements of all our favorite fairy tales from childhood. It had so many new elements too, and therefore not at all predictable.
Then it had all our favorite elements from IPK, and so much more.
You integrated all of this into this beautiful story in such a seamless way, that it turned out to be like a beautiful quilt. Need i say more? I am in love with that story and will probably read it all over several times.

Then, I just couldn't stop myself from going to your index, and read all your OS's. Each one of them was superbly written.
and then the 2 shot, and finally I read this SS. Now I am doomed. Since this is not complete, I will have to start stalking this thread!

This is just so funny and soo cute at the same time. You are bringing out all the really good scenes in such a nice way.And I am truly enjoying this funny side of Aakash.

Oh BTW, I love your name too... Rasgullas being my all time favorite sweets, besides Jalebis, of course. 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
"Cooking inedible food takes a lot of patience and practice" 😆
Loved how they were bickering...!!! 😊 Cant believe they decided to break up over pakoras...🤣

"kya bolu ab" That one line in the show is one of my favorite... Whenever I am in meed of some comic relief I just watch that scene!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So a few days back, whilst Twiggy and me were discussing stories on the forum she told me to read 'An Apate Affair'. And though I had it bookmarked when you started it initially, I never got around to reading it. But now that I have, I am so, SO happy. This one makes you laugh, giggle, and also very successfully ends up leaving you nostalgic. Amazing, amazing work! A few things I loved the most, and would like to highlight :P

>He could look at a bird flying and count its wings.
(And my love for ASR increases a little more <3)

>Aakash's exultation, "Bhabhi"!
(I might even like this Aakash more than the one in our beloved show;)

>And when he tucks that stray lock of hair behind her ear..Sigh! I could swoon all day long.

>The pen scene, the unraveling of her hair. My, my! I mean I had a steady stream of dhakdhak buzzing inside my mind. Beautiful Rasgulla!

>Arnav not liking her moving away from him <3

>And the pakora part was hilarious.

Looking forward to this story! :DD


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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...the fake break up n truth behind the praises!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Was watching IPk how sad these dialogues are

"ASR, it's me Laavanya"

"I was the person who hugged you, I knew you never hugged me, but can you please hug me at least once"

What a matured girl and matured break up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the way Khushi stood up to Arnav and refused to let him break up with her.
Fiestiness is afterall her second nature.
Khushi putting Arnav in a spot before his entire family and winking was epic 😆
Jahan Arnav aur khushi ho vahan pagalpan aur madness to hoga hi! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Relived all those said moments through u writing and made me watch them all over again.
I'm commenting for the last three updates...sorrry.
Teej epi was one of my favourite one.the whole time Khushi was simply irresistable for him.he never left a chance to touch her,pin her.i still remember the glances and touches he send towards her.not to forget his concern at her fainting.

7th update-i lost the count of times Arnav had lifted Khushi...him lifting her was like breathing in ipk,not even the most common,but the most basic thing.the way he holds her close,and she clutches his shirt...haaye!

8th update-Again my favourite,the resignation scene.i got goosebumps due to her dialogues in that scene
Again awesome update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ek update ki kimmat tum kya jaanu Saiyu baby :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ladka bada kamaal

Lagta hai murga halal ka :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oo la la la

Oo la la la

Tu hai meri fantasy...

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