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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
awesum...plz pm me d nxt tym u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome update
loved it
thanks for the pm
continue soon
all the best for ur exams..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome story .. cricketer virat n journalist maanvi n devil misha ..
all updates were really nice but short yr .. make it longer next time n update sooon !!
Edited by Tuba_KSG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Hey everyone!


I am back again, my exams are over and I am having holidays. So I want to finish this story before my holidays ends. Anyway it will be having only 2 to 3 updates! :)


The number of comments is getting lesser and lesser update by update. It really discourages me a lot. A single word will mean a lot to me. So please do comment, even if it's appreciation or criticism, it's welcomed with warm hands. Don't forget to comment, I can at least know someone is reading :D


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The one who had changed her life some hours back stepped out of the car. She was smiling in her usual mysterious way. It was Misha. She looked awfully glad and proud of herself.

She started coming closer and closer and Manvi kept her eyes on her. She was coming towards her with her usual evil smirk and Mona Lisa smile. How much did Manvi hate that?


Manvi stood up suddenly and started to move, she of course didn't want an encounter with Misha. But Misha was determined to irritate Manvi and hence stopped her from going.


Misha shouted boldly, "Stop Miss. Manvi Chaudary. Seems like you are scared of talking to me. I promise. I won't eat you." and let out her evil laugh.


"I am never afraid of stupid girls, I always try to keep distance." Manvi fought back.


Misha didn't give up either,"Oh really? If you call me stupid then you are stupidest, right?"


Manvi was fed up, "Can you please leave me alone, Misha? I want some peace. And I have a ofr you, leave Virat alone."


Misha started laughing again and Manvi stood there stunned, "I have already left Virat Miss.Manvi. I have released him out of my stranglehold and allowed him to leave his life with someone else." And started laughing again.


Manvi gasped in shock, a feeling of happiness and shock invaded her. If what misha was telling was true, then she was so happy, but why will she do that?


Still in shock Manvi asked again, "Are you serious?"


"Yes. I am. Why should I lie? I have left Virat.", she smirked.


"But why?", Manvi now wanted to know the reason.


"Because I have received what I wanted. You know what? Poor Virat. He has left his dream to marry me. No, he is not poor but he is world's biggest fool." Let out a small laugh and continued "And that's what I needed, I wanted him to give up his place in the Indian team."


Sudden anger spread within Manvi like fire. What she believed was true, Misha really was cheating on her Virat. But why will she want to leave his dream?


"But why did you want him to give up his place in India team?" Manvi asked.


"For my brother, who else? If that Virat gave up his place means, my brother will be getting chance in the team.", Misha replied.


"But who is your brother?", she was shell shocked that the words hardly came out.


"Oh, so you don't know him. He is Ravi Mishra."


"What? You are his sister? He is the one with whom you were in the theater right?" Manvi started the rapid fire.


"Yeah he is. My sweet caring bro. So you misunderstood he was my boy friend." Laughed again but louder this time.


"No! So who is the one whom you were kissing?", she shot the next question on Misha.


"Oh! You saw that too? Naughty girl! That is my boy friend." Misha said with pride.


"Your boyfriend?" Manvi stood there as if a 200 volt shock just hit her.


"Yeah, my BF. Anymore question Miss. Manvi Chaudary?" She stressed Manvi's name so hard that hardly air came out.


"Why are you telling me all this?" Manvi asked again.


Now Misha was serious, "That's a relevant question. Because I wanted you to know all this before you go away from this world."


"Oh! You mean, my death? I am never going to die unless I tell Virat everything and save him from your evil works." Manvi said in such a rough voice that hardly anyone could understand it was her.


"Really? Let's see what happens. Now I am getting late. Goodbye Baby." She said pulling Manvi's cheeks, let out a laugh and turned back to go.


Manvi recalled all those Misha just told her, it was so unbelievable! But is she so stupid to tell everything to Manvi so openly? Was Misha so sure that Virat won't believe Manvi? Or did she have other plans?


There was no time to find answers to these questions, because it felt so important to inform Virat about it. At least she should stop him from giving up his place in World Cup. She immediately rushed towards her home, took her scooter and rode towards Virat's apartment praying to God that he will be there. He had to be there.


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Virat had been sitting in his room recalling all those he and Manvi dreamt, the dreams they both build together. And the same dreams which were shattered hours ago. The day's events were so unacceptable that he was still in a magical world, but he had to come out of it, come out of this trauma. Now, Misha seemed important for him, much more important than his dream.


So the time to inform the cricketing board about his resigning had come. He was so sad but he believed it was bound to happen. He dressed up fast and rushed downstairs, was about to start his bike and go to the cricketing board. He really thought that instead of making a call, he had to go and inform.


When he was about to start his bike he heard a loud scream. At once, he couldn't understand whose it was or from where it was coming from?


But he ran outside sensing some danger. He was shell shocked to see his best friend Manvi lying there in the middle of a pool of blood.


He closed his eyes and opened it again to make sure that his eyes are working properly and what he is seeing in front of his eyes is true. It was!


She was hit by a truck and the truck went away without even minding what has happened to the girl. For an instant Virat felt that he should follow the truck and kill the driver, but more important was to save Manvi. Her life was in danger and he had to save her!


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Inside the truck the driver made a call, with an evil smirk on his face. "hello Misha mam, The work is done, she would have by now reached heaven" And let out a laugh, The person on the other side laughed harder. You could imagine who it was?


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How was that? Good or Boring? Do tell me!


I am waiting for some rotten eggs and tomatoes as I am wearing my safety helmet. I know there would be many as I just made Manvi meet with an accident. But please do comment and press the thank you button.


Never mind karo ji, it is a part of the story.Stay tuned for the next update!


Till then,

Linaya


Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
wow👏 u updated one of my fav story wow very happy and yes i loved u r update as always dear...
i am a regular follower of this story in myed...and ur stalker too😉...hope u remember me😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice update...
update soon

bt do save manvi plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
An awesome and intriguing storyline! Really liking this one too! You are an incredible writer! Keep Going! I will always read your work! Sorry for the late reply... was a little busy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
this is goood bt short one 😛
the secrets out were shocking and unexpected ...bt manvi's accident was a huge shock cant believe misha can go to this extent 😡
bt atleast manvi saved virat from signing those paper and leaving his place misha's plans double crossed 😆
jst hope manvi gets well sooon
thanx alott for the pm and update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Oh my god!!
Cnt believe that happened
eeekkkss cnt wait
hope virat realises wats in his heart
thanx for pm
plzzz update quickly 😉

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