VirMan SS: Unrealized LOVE! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
finally u updated
awesome update
waiting for virat ans
liked it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Just read it. It's too good! And cricket is an added attraction for me! :) Love it! Superb work! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Omg thanx sooo much for updating this
amazing update
hate misha
hoppe virmans misunderstanding clears very soon
update quickly plzzz 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
finally you updated
the update is awesome..
loved it
hate this misha
want to know how will virat react
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
it was awesome
loved the update
virat and maanvi both wants to talk to eachother
hate misha
what will virat do now
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Hey guys!


I am again back with another update, I know I update very rarely. But I hope you understand. Thanks for waiting patiently.


~~~~~~~


Hoping it to be a night mare or a joke, he asked again, "What? Are you serious?"

"Yes, Virat and we cannot do anything about it. You have only two options left, one to leave cricket or to leave me." She started faking crocodile tears and Virat as usual fell for it.


"No darling, don't say like that. Let's find a way" Virat assured.


Still not satisfied Misha replied between her sobs, "No Virat. There is no way. I know we will get separated forever."


"I told you, stop it! Nothing will happen to our relationship. For you, I can do anything. And if I will have to leave my carrier, then I will do that too.", Virat replied sternly.


"What Virat? What are you saying? It is your dream to have a place in the Indian Team and now.." She sobbed again.


Much more sternly, Virat said it again,"For me, you are more than my dream. You are more than everything. I can do anything for you."


Suddenly Misha hugged Virat , a heart broken Virat hugged her back. Everything was about to get over, his dream, his Manvi's dream and his carrier. His passion was going to get destroyed, he was going to destroy it hoping to have a new and beautiful life in return. He never knew, all this were painful lies and nothing else.


"Are you sure you are leaving your carrier?" Misha asked again.


With much thinking and after taking a deep breath, Virat nodded his head in agreement.


Misha looked quite glad about his decision, Virat thought it was because she was going to marry him but he never knew it was not. He never realized, she had other plans and other aims.


"So Virat, when are you going to inform the cricketing board about this? They will have to search for a new player to fill your place." Misha made him remember.


"Yeah today." Virat replied with pain.


"Now I have to go Virat, Mom and Dad will be waiting for me. They must be really happy that I have found my man. So bye dear, see you tomorrow," Misha started to leave.


"Okay Bye Dear", Virat moved forward, kissed her and bid goodbye.


~~~~~

On the other hand, Manvi was still staring onto the crowded roads, she never realized time was passing by. Slowly the daylight went away and darkness came aside. The buildings started to get artificially lighted and the streets looked beautiful.


She decided to go for a walk, she could not bear this dread silence in her room anymore. It was breaking her heart into million pieces.


Climbing down the stairs, she wasn't paying any attention to the people or the things around her. She kept on bumping into someone and she stepped on the tail of a doggy, it started barking, but nor could it's loud barks awoke her.


Emotions filled her mind, she was happy that Virat achieved her dream. She was sad that Virat was not talking to her. She was angry on herself for shouting at her boss. She was shocked that Virat loved and believed a devil like Misha.


Slowly, step by step, she moved on the busy streets. Searching for peace, she sat on a bench. She saw a Ford Figo passing by. It stopped some distance ago.


The one who had changed her life some hours back stepped out of the car. She was smiling in her usual mysterious way. It was Misha. She looked awfully glad and proud of herself.


~~~~~


So how was the update, buddies? Nice enough to leave some comments? If yes, then don't go without commenting. :)


Please comment and press the like tab.

Am I lagging the story too much? If yes, then please tell me. I just cannot stop myself from explaining each bit detailed. :P


Wish me luck, it's my exams and don't forget to include me in your prayers.

Love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
wow loved👏 it dear though already i have read in myed... one of my my fav story..😊
all the best for your exams dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
the story is too interesting but yur updates are sooo late :-(
this was a short one but goood ...
update next part soon and thanx alott for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome update
loved it
poor virman
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome start
loved the concept
please pm me when u update

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